Death of the Snow Heaps

DEATH   OF   THE   SNOW   HEAPS


Like full-bodied youngsters they ruled the street
For a while - rude, unchallenged strength sweet;
Their short life  -    immaculate seeming. 
Hard heartless shells  -   cold, gleaming.


Now skin shrinks  to a nothing-life-span,
Revealing cigarette ends,  rusty beer can,
Chewing gum,  mud-and-dirt:  a  midden  -
Lifetime-accumulated  and  temporarily  hidden.


Now,  shrunk and cracked like old men’s skin
As they lie  and die dissolute  and thin,
They will soon be forgotten by all talk
As they bleed water  across the sidewalk.


Their pile of dirty secrets will  soon  be
Exposed in the sun for all to  see. 
The spotless snow  was a  perfect concealer.
Death the leveller is also death the revealer.


……………………………………


NOTE

City snow heaps in the streets,  lasting from November to March,  become 
filled with hidden trash, which is  only exposed when the heaps melt  in spring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/19/2011 1:53:00 AM
hmmm... really crappy! ( i mean the way the whole scenery is depicted in this solid write---- the remnants and mess that winter sometimes leaves before her final farewell... splendid, syd.. i am flattred at how you can copy and paste my piece,lol... :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:58:00 PM
Feeling your emotion here Syd as we have the same problem in N.J.... so much melting today and snow called for Wednesday.. more heaps.. clever creative write luv..
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