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Clarity Pyramid.. See related image detail. Activity: Pyramid Poem ~ Learning Alliteration | DIY Homeschooler Title plus 2- 3 lines stanzas, then a single line. For Joseph May

Death

DEATH
Breath gone
Heart's flow stops

Husband's death cut deep
He is missed, life changed now
Knowing that soon death will come

"Preparations made through Jesus"

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2026

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Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2026 at 1:31 AM

Congrats on your worthy win, Sara

August 30, 2026 at 5:05 AM

Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate you taking the extra effort to drop by with congratulations. Sara K. ⭐

August 29, 2026 at 12:13 PM

Sara, congratulations on your 1st Prize win. I am so proud to share the podium with you.

August 29, 2026 at 1:13 PM

Why, thank you, Pascal. I appreciate the visit with congrats. Sara K

August 29, 2026 at 10:15 AM

Back with congratulations on your win with this wonderful and exquisitely crafted poem, Howard.

August 29, 2026 at 1:11 PM

Your return visit is encouraging, Lasaad. I appreciate the extra effort. Sara K.

August 29, 2026 at 8:41 AM

A poignant write Sara, Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win

August 29, 2026 at 1:10 PM

Thank you, Joseph, for letting me know that I placed. Sara K.

August 22, 2026 at 7:14 AM

It's heart-breaking to lose the love of your life Sara, I feel the sadness in your verse. He'll always be in your heart and will always be in your memories.. Tom🌹

August 22, 2026 at 12:40 PM

Thank you, Tom. Yes, memories will always flood. Your empathy is uplifting. ⭐ Sara K.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 20, 2026 at 1:20 AM

- Really sorry for your sadness, Sara - Don't think about tomorrow, live today :) - hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 20, 2026 at 5:58 AM

🥰

August 20, 2026 at 4:51 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you for your empathy. One day at a time is all I can do because some days I can't even do today. 👍. Sara K.

August 19, 2026 at 6:32 PM

Dear Sara, I understand that deep pain. I'm sorry you have felt it, too. Lovely poem.

August 20, 2026 at 4:50 AM

Ann, if you understand, I would say that you have gone through that experience as well. Thank you for the comforting words. Sara K. 👍

August 19, 2026 at 3:08 PM

wish you will survive a long time, very touching poetry

August 19, 2026 at 5:00 PM

Thank you, Yann, for the well wishes. God is in control. I don't know where it will go from this minute and will have to depend on him. Sara K.

Andrea Dietrich

August 17, 2026 at 11:41 PM

Excellent use if this form, dear

August 18, 2026 at 4:57 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit and encouragement. Sara K.

August 17, 2026 at 11:03 PM

I can sense your deep grief, Sara. When one's partner dies, one is half dead. But each one has to live on, not in despair, but with hope.

August 18, 2026 at 4:56 AM

Valsa, I know I will see him again because our faith is one thing we shared. Thanks for the comforting comments. Sara K. 👍

August 17, 2026 at 6:32 PM

i feel you to the core, sara... keep the faith...sublime!

August 18, 2026 at 4:55 AM

Thank you for the comforting supportive comments, Nette. Your visit is uplifting. It has been 9 months, and it is getting better. Sara K.

sara Etgen-Baker

August 17, 2026 at 4:45 PM

poignant and powerful poem, Sara K. Sending hugs and blessings, Sara B

August 18, 2026 at 4:54 AM

Your visits today have⭐ been a very nice surprise, Sara B. You've made my morning. Sara K. Thank you for the comforting words.

Paula Goldsmith

August 17, 2026 at 1:03 PM

WOW!!! Your "DEATH" is a powerful write. I am so sorry.... "Good Luck" in the contest. Sounds like a winner to me. Have a blessed/fun day writing away................

August 17, 2026 at 4:26 PM

Thank you, Paula. I know there will be some that are better so I don't get my hopes up. Your visit is inspiring. Sara K. 👍

August 17, 2026 at 10:19 AM

Your poem captures a poignant and introspective look at loss and the inevitability of death, Sara. Really good for the contest. Good luck

August 17, 2026 at 4:24 PM

Thank you for the encouraging words, Lasaad. Your visit has been uplifting. ⭐. Sara K.

August 17, 2026 at 10:16 AM

Sigh.. I just came to know and am so sorry for your loss, dear Sara.. this is truly heart-wrenching, the loss of our loved ones.. this is a pain too heavy to bear. And a wound that never truly heals! It just gets deeper.. and we get accustomed to the ache. I know how grieving it must be ~ but know that his presence is always there, around you, and amidst the stars.. I hope you feel the warmth of memories and love in your heart. Sending you very best wishes for the contest, lots of soothing starlight and cosmic healing your way! May you feel angelic essence in your heart, with peace.. 💫💫❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹

August 17, 2026 at 4:19 PM

Thank you, Hiya, it has been 9 months since his death and healing has come slowly. I will always love and miss him. I thank you for your sympathy and comforting words. 👍 Sara K.

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