Death

A corpse in a coffin
Like a turtle in a shell
A torched arm breaks
Like a slice in a bell

A cough in the wind
A mouth draining dread
Sea running free
Grass tinted red

Moon cuts the morning
Stars dance today
Rain whipping down
Shoes slip away

Scoop out the dirt
Tear open the ground
Catch a falling tear
Shake it off, without a sound

Stand on the snow
Lean in real close
Whistle for an answer
Turn around and choke

Crawl over to your car
and zip through the sun
The night has boiled over
The deed is done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Great imagery here ... I'm right at the gravesite ... the older I get it seems the more folks are leaving ... smile ... its definitely a difficult mystery of life ... thanks for bringing your talent to PoetrySoup, Candice!!
Fraser Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 11:34 AM
Candice this is an awesome piece of poetry, i could picture every stanza perfectly, just a great write all over & a warm warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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April 24, 2009 at 4:28 PM
artful , skilfill and everything else poetic. a rare talent you have. and i can tel you've used it before; many times before. the piece was so deep it took me in. John Henry Loving III
Augustus Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 12:37 PM
Very nice and heavy poem. Congratulations on placing in Sami's contest.
Winter Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 6:30 AM
Wow, this is awesome heavy duty. Congrats on your well deserved win in Sami's contest. Love, Shar
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