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Death

A corpse in a coffin Like a turtle in a shell A torched arm breaks Like a slice in a bell A cough in the wind A mouth draining dread Sea running free Grass tinted red Moon cuts the morning Stars dance today Rain whipping down Shoes slip away Scoop out the dirt Tear open the ground Catch a falling tear Shake it off, without a sound Stand on the snow Lean in real close Whistle for an answer Turn around and choke Crawl over to your car and zip through the sun The night has boiled over The deed is done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/15/2009 11:58:00 AM
Great imagery here ... I'm right at the gravesite ... the older I get it seems the more folks are leaving ... smile ... its definitely a difficult mystery of life ... thanks for bringing your talent to PoetrySoup, Candice!!
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Date: 6/20/2009 11:34:00 AM
Candice this is an awesome piece of poetry, i could picture every stanza perfectly, just a great write all over & a warm warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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Date: 4/24/2009 4:28:00 PM
artful , skilfill and everything else poetic. a rare talent you have. and i can tel you've used it before; many times before. the piece was so deep it took me in. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 4/15/2009 12:37:00 PM
Very nice and heavy poem. Congratulations on placing in Sami's contest.
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Date: 4/15/2009 6:30:00 AM
Wow, this is awesome heavy duty. Congrats on your well deserved win in Sami's contest. Love, Shar
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