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Damned death, does it dilly-dally, darkening doors then squirm pass by. Disfavor of blood dark alley, doors impassable; man, to die. Dressed in a shroud, clutching a scythe, dimmed soul as it began to writhe. Dread fills the desolate valley. 6/6/2018

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Date: 6/24/2018 7:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this well-written dark Pleiades. Different, creative.
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Date: 6/24/2018 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, great Pleiades well written. :))
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Date: 6/23/2018 10:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Eve. You packed a lot of imagery into the poem.
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Eve :)
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Date: 6/23/2018 12:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve for your fine win with this well penned pleiades ...
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Date: 6/22/2018 7:48:00 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATS, EVE! Janice
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Date: 6/22/2018 4:26:00 PM
No escape from the scythe!..Congrats on your win Eve..
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Date: 6/22/2018 4:20:00 PM
So glad to see this one again placed high. Congrats to you, Eve.
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Date: 6/10/2018 7:24:00 PM
Good Pleiades, Eve! Janice
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:57:00 PM
I love all the use of the D words. Nicely done,Eva. I wrote on this theme too recently.
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:21:00 AM
It s truly is a really beautiful poem, a poem which contain a really deep message, funny isn t it that death is considered to be a villian but in actually it isn t, it ends all our pains, all worries and take us to a world of happiness, unite us with our God, this life is temporarily, real life begins after death,
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Date: 6/7/2018 10:55:00 AM
Superb - I love the flow. Powerful, Eve.
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Date: 6/7/2018 4:55:00 AM
wow; eerily stunning, eve... an entry much better than mine!..huggs
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Date: 6/7/2018 1:46:00 AM
The old grim reaper will pay us all a visit one day. Well written Eve. Tom
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:22:00 AM
Deep and dark Eve but our days are numbered ! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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