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Dearest Santa

Dearest Santa
Santa I am giving you plenty of time
To get me what has been playing on my mind
That is a horse and coach like Cinderella
But most of all I want a charming fella.

21st August 2021

YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: L Milton Hankins

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Panagiota Romios Date: 9/7/2021 7:59:00 AM KUDOS,BELLE, SEND ME A prince, if you have an extra one. Cool poem. Panagiota Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/7/2021 9:29:00 AM I will do that for you Panagiota, if two come along then one is for you. Thank you… Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/28/2021 8:27:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Belle. This is so pleasantly romantic, with its touch of humor. Best of wishes, Evelyn ;) Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/28/2021 8:37:00 PM Thank you very much Evelyn and best wishes sent to you too… Belle

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/25/2021 10:37:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. "Dearest Santa" please answer with a yes. Have a blessed day.......... Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/28/2021 8:35:00 PM Thank you Paula, hope Santa reads your plea. Blessings, Belle

Beata Agustin Date: 8/25/2021 1:25:00 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and for the chuckle it has created. God bless you. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/28/2021 8:33:00 PM Thank you Beata, we all could do with a chuckle. God bless you too, Belle

Line Gauthier Date: 8/24/2021 8:26:00 PM totally delightful ~ a winner for sure ~ Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/28/2021 8:31:00 PM Thank you Line, much appreciated… Belle

Jan Allison Date: 8/23/2021 12:21:00 PM what a fun poem Belle, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/23/2021 4:40:00 PM Thank you Jan… Hugs Belle :-) xx

Terry Flood Date: 8/23/2021 11:43:00 AM Hope Santa comes early (as opposed to prematurely.... STOP IT, TERRY, this is a sweet ode... treat it with respect). Sorry, Belle, congrats on your win... hope you don’t have to wait till Christmas for your Prince to co... STOP IT ;-) Terry Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/23/2021 4:39:00 PM Yes stop it Terry, too much excitement can cause an old gal’s premature death and I want to see if Santa comes up with the gifts on my list. Thanks for the congrats and the laugh… Belle

L Milton Hankins Date: 8/23/2021 9:43:00 AM Good one, Belle. Congratulations on your placement out of 50 entries in my recent contest. Super job! Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/23/2021 9:51:00 AM Thank you so much for my placement Milton, a fabulous list of entries there was, congratulations to everyone… Belle

Lindsay Laurie Date: 8/22/2021 9:44:00 PM Hello Belle ... a charming four line verse and I hope that your Christmas wish comes true for you - thanks Belle - Lindsay Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/21/2021 12:43:00 PM I pray he brings him to you wrapped in a red bow and silky pajamas, lol Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/21/2021 3:01:00 PM So do I, in my dreams… Thank you Mystic Rose

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/21/2021 5:15:00 AM Pity I'm too old to fit the bill. Hugs. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/21/2021 10:05:00 AM Ha, not a young one myself Victor but ones never too old to dream… Hugs, Belle

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/21/2021 4:21:00 AM But only if you've been good Belle lol. Good luck in the contest Tom Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/21/2021 10:03:00 AM Thank you Tom, I might be naughty some of the time. but I try to be nice all of the time… Belle

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/21/2021 2:10:00 AM Sounds good to me, ha ha ha, Belle, this is real fun:) Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/21/2021 2:13:00 AM That was quick Joe, Ho! Ho! Many thanks… Belle