Beryl Edmonds Poet Light Verse

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Dearest Santa

Dearest Santa
Santa I am giving you plenty of time
To get me what has been playing on my mind
That is a horse and coach like Cinderella
But most of all I want a charming fella.

21st August 2021

YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: L Milton Hankins

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Panagiota Romios September 7, 2021 at 7:59 AM KUDOS,BELLE, SEND ME A prince, if you have an extra one. Cool poem. Panagiota Beryl Edmonds September 7, 2021 at 9:29 AM I will do that for you Panagiota, if two come along then one is for you. Thank you… Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 28, 2021 at 8:27 PM Congratulations on your win, Belle. This is so pleasantly romantic, with its touch of humor. Best of wishes, Evelyn ;) Beryl Edmonds August 28, 2021 at 8:37 PM Thank you very much Evelyn and best wishes sent to you too… Belle

Paula Goldsmith August 25, 2021 at 10:37 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. "Dearest Santa" please answer with a yes. Have a blessed day.......... Beryl Edmonds August 28, 2021 at 8:35 PM Thank you Paula, hope Santa reads your plea. Blessings, Belle

Beata Agustin August 25, 2021 at 1:25 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and for the chuckle it has created. God bless you. Beryl Edmonds August 28, 2021 at 8:33 PM Thank you Beata, we all could do with a chuckle. God bless you too, Belle

Line Gauthier August 24, 2021 at 8:26 PM totally delightful ~ a winner for sure ~ Beryl Edmonds August 28, 2021 at 8:31 PM Thank you Line, much appreciated… Belle

Jan Allison August 23, 2021 at 12:21 PM what a fun poem Belle, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Beryl Edmonds August 23, 2021 at 4:40 PM Thank you Jan… Hugs Belle :-) xx

Terry Flood August 23, 2021 at 11:43 AM Hope Santa comes early (as opposed to prematurely.... STOP IT, TERRY, this is a sweet ode... treat it with respect). Sorry, Belle, congrats on your win... hope you don’t have to wait till Christmas for your Prince to co... STOP IT ;-) Terry Beryl Edmonds August 23, 2021 at 4:39 PM Yes stop it Terry, too much excitement can cause an old gal’s premature death and I want to see if Santa comes up with the gifts on my list. Thanks for the congrats and the laugh… Belle

L Milton Hankins August 23, 2021 at 9:43 AM Good one, Belle. Congratulations on your placement out of 50 entries in my recent contest. Super job! Beryl Edmonds August 23, 2021 at 9:51 AM Thank you so much for my placement Milton, a fabulous list of entries there was, congratulations to everyone… Belle

Lindsay Laurie August 22, 2021 at 9:44 PM Hello Belle ... a charming four line verse and I hope that your Christmas wish comes true for you - thanks Belle - Lindsay

Mystic Rose Rose August 21, 2021 at 12:43 PM I pray he brings him to you wrapped in a red bow and silky pajamas, lol Beryl Edmonds August 21, 2021 at 3:01 PM So do I, in my dreams… Thank you Mystic Rose

Victor Buhagiar August 21, 2021 at 5:15 AM Pity I'm too old to fit the bill. Hugs. Beryl Edmonds August 21, 2021 at 10:05 AM Ha, not a young one myself Victor but ones never too old to dream… Hugs, Belle

Tom Cunningham August 21, 2021 at 4:21 AM But only if you've been good Belle lol. Good luck in the contest Tom Beryl Edmonds August 21, 2021 at 10:03 AM Thank you Tom, I might be naughty some of the time. but I try to be nice all of the time… Belle

Joanna Daniel August 21, 2021 at 2:10 AM Sounds good to me, ha ha ha, Belle, this is real fun:) Beryl Edmonds August 21, 2021 at 2:13 AM That was quick Joe, Ho! Ho! Many thanks… Belle