Dear Treasure Chest

“The heart hath its own memory, like the mind, and in
It are enshrined the precious keepsakes, into which is
Wrought the giver’s loving thought.” Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Dear Treasure Chest

Invaluable is tender love’s domain,
that ruby red that lies beneath the breast.
But just as precious is the treasure chest
which houses our intelligence - the brain.
With memories exquisite to retain,
this coffer is the one that serves us best.
And likely we’ll not know how well we’re blessed
till luster of our keepsakes starts to wane.
The ruby oft is lost; we pay a toll.
Yet time and time again, that gem we find.
Not so within the storehouse of our soul
when strands of fond remembrances unwind.
Dear treasure chest of which we’ve no control,
what good the heart when pearls fade from the mind?

For the contest of Sara Kendrick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:39 AM
G'day Andrea... really nice flowing poetry. Thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Carter Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 9:53 AM
I really like the ending and the line "ruby red that lies beneath the breast". To me it gives the heart much more of a surreal feeling.
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 10:50 PM
A 7 ! ! Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend Eve
Guzzi Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations on your win. Light & Love
Lawless Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 6:18 PM
W O W .....that's it.....W O W...
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Andrea, Iwanted to thank you personally for entering my contest...An interesting way to go with the theme..Thanks for all the visits to my work..Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 3:01 AM
Back to give my praise and Congrats on your win. I am so glad this poem made the winner's list. It is wonderful Andrea!
Lindley Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 6:46 PM
Big congrats on the win my friend. As usual you ink words that turn into a gem. All great but this really got me.. "The ruby oft is lost; we pay a toll. Yet time and time again, that gem we find. Not so within the storehouse of our soul when strands of fond remembrances unwind." A7 As I've lost a few rubies in my day and paid the toll.. Yet even those sad memories are most precious to me!
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Hi Andrea, I am stopping back to say congratulations on your nice win for this insightful poem. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:43 PM
a wonderful quote and a beautifully penned sonnet - congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx
May Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 9:03 AM
I love this one...Congrats on a great win Andrea
A. Sharma Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Beautifully done Andrea! Congrats on big win!
Guzzi Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 7:34 PM
We all have to go somehow I guess? Perhaps it is a kindness to forget? [as long as I don't loose the way home! - thank the lord for GPS!] Light & Love
Sirak Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Sadness wrapped within exquisite beauty as only you can do, Andrea.
Falotico Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Wouldn't be a trip to the Soup without reading my friend..xoox Michael
Austin Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 10:47 AM
Yes - the last two lines of the first stanza. Love, daver
Walker Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Thought provoking and tender poem.
La France Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:03 AM
Andrea, this sonnet is just so beautiful, you have such a way with words that touch me deeply, well done and thanks so much for visiting, I write . . . .
Peranteau Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 12:06 AM
I love the quote of Longfellow Andrea, and your write is exceptional ! Awesome dear poet ! And, by-the-way....you owe me a penny if you read my next write ! ;) Have a wonderful week my friend.....much love, james
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:29 PM
This is oh so beautiful and a winner, Andrea...to my faves. Hugs, Rhonda
Johnson Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:11 PM
Wow, I'm not sure I've ever enjoyed reading one of your poems more Andrea. It truly speaks to the passing presence of the past. Peace. :) Worth at least a dime. :)
Haight Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:19 PM
Very deep and much to think about in your words, Andrea. Through the years we all pray that our "treasure chest" of heart and mind be kept in tact and in sync. Such a lovely Sonnet. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:15 PM
How beautifully inspirational this poem is Andrea. You fit right in with the masters! I loved this! 7
May Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Beautiful write Andrea...great ending line..."Taking Aim is not in the contest.....hugs
Anish Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 3:45 PM
You are so prolific! I hope you win the contest. I think I might try to write a pantoum again. Free verse is great but there is something to be said for rhyme and form as well. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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