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Caught a cute moment on video!

Their heads superglued, smiles extend, the spread of their deer quilt upon his lap. They read, as if one, “Mon—ey can’t buy hap-pi-ness but it can buy hunting gear… which is pretty much the same thing.” Last line succinctly added to their chime. The deer stand, his pride, sometimes given up to his wife, as he nervously waits in the pickup truck. Recently women show their trophies on media with bowed knee and the stance of a hunting rifle. Husband pounds chest. 2/4/2021

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Date: 2/4/2021 6:54:00 PM
Apparently you live where I grew up Kim. I hear you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 7:37:00 PM
:) You make me smile!
Date: 2/4/2021 5:47:00 PM
I was thinking 'deer' glancing at the title, and you came through for me! This is a great write, dear... So, you have come up with a revised definition of a 'trophy wife.' Good going! Cheers, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 7:37:00 PM
Oh you add so much zing to my poem! Thanks!
Date: 2/4/2021 4:42:00 PM
Ha! So true and you present it very well. I really like this Kim. Too cute! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!

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