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Dear Old Swing

Dear old swing, hanging from our back yard tree.
Well I remember those long summer days
as memories of childhood now flood me.
For hours I swang! It was more than a phase.

Well I remember those long summer days.
Alone, feeling free, with daydreams flowing,
for hours I swang! It was more than a phase.
How high I could climb once I got going!

Alone, feeling free, with daydreams flowing!
Thinking of back then – I sit with a sigh.
How high I could climb once I got going.
Let me once again fly up to the sky!

Thinking of back then – I sit with a sigh
as memories of childhood now flood me.
Let me once again fly up to the sky -
Dear old swing, hanging from our back yard tree.


June 26, 2020
for Eve Roper's "Feelings of Nostalgia" Poetry Contest
Submitted 8/25/2022 for Joseph May's the 'Pantoum - Old or New' Poetry Contest
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Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 4:21 AM
I love the swing! Was my favorite! Great nostalgic write! Congratulations, Andrea!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations on your win with this nostalgic poem Andrea. Blessings xxoo
May Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 10:03 AM
A swing brings back memories of old, Congrats on your win Andrea, Very nicely done
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 5:33 PM
such wonderful memories of childhood, many congratulations on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Mishra Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 2:51 AM
Your muse made me want to get back to those childhood days and that beautiful swing once more Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Andrea, great flow, imagery, and feeling you created in this verse. Thank you for entering the contest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Watt Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 4:49 PM
I don't swing any more because my aging inner ear can't cope with it any more, but this was a fun ride back in the time machine to childhood. Congrats!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Congratulations on your win. Old swings and memories of childhood are the best. Enjoy your win and day................
Ermine Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 5:02 PM
Nicely captured. 'Dear' it is, and more forlorn missing its child counterpart, than the busy teenager becomes. Lovely celebratory poem.
Ball Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 5:22 PM
Now those are the memories. God Job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Wonderful memories in your flowing lines.I loved swinging when I was a little girl. Now when I try, I get motion sickness. The memories are far better. GL in the contest. Rhonda xx
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 3:53 PM
Me too, I can't do it any more or I feel sick. I LOVED fast crazy rides at the carnival and those make me sick now too . Uggg. it sucks to get older.
Cunningham Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Beautiful memories Andrea, where does time go. Tom
Poet Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 1:08 PM
Lovely!
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 3:53 PM
thanks, my dear friend. What are you up to these days?
Pandit Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 6:39 AM
Always a nostalgic odyssey to harken back--you found your memories Andrea--no doubt a win for you.
Watt Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 2:03 AM
This is so relateable. The nostalgia is rich with memories of flying on a swing. You make pantoums seem so easy with your great flow. GL to you.
Tor Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 10:31 PM
When your a child you try to swing as hi as you can. You brought me back to those memories Andrea, with this cute piece... Luv Michael
Adams Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 9:59 PM
you made me go back to my younger years and envision the feeling of flying through the air on my swing... wonderful write Andrea :)
Michael Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 9:06 PM
Lovely write...puts you right back in time...daydream swinging...
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