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Dear Old Heather

(Inspired by Silent One's limerick, "Queen Of Her Stage" ) There once was a canary full of rage. Who shrewdly trapped a sly cat in her cage. without a feather ruffled Kittie's meows he muffled, she now ruled the roost as queen of her stage! There was a time when Kittie was nasty oh that little one could be quite feisty but now she eats truffles without any cuddles she sits behind bars eating nothing tasty There once was a cat who ruffled Tweet's feather a Kittie from hell who could never tether sometimes they did fight who was wrong who was right the only one who knew was dear old Heather !

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Date: 3/29/2024 3:36:00 PM
a playful poem and delightful read of 'meow' rivalries. Impressed that you wrote two Limericks interconnected and true to form. I appreciate your creativity with this one. Have a splendid Easter weekend, hugs and blessings, Sara
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Date: 3/29/2024 7:29:00 AM
I am so happy that I inspired you and you wrote two great limericks to follow on form it!
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Date: 3/29/2024 5:23:00 AM
Dear Rose, You unfold a charming tale of feline rivalry and the triumph of cunning. I loved how your poem captures the whimsical dynamics between the canary and the cat with delightful wit. The imagery of Heather, the wise observer, adds depth to the narrative, leaving a smile on the reader's face. It's a playful homage to the intricacies of animal relationships and the power of strategy. - Blessings, Daniel
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