Dear Mother

Dear mother, please pardon me,
please don't wipe me from your memory; 
For, the road that I have taken 
was not what you wanted to be. 

But I want to thank you still 
for guiding me then through the hill;
Though I was often careless 
on my grip upon the wheel. 

I tried to climb the highest mountain;
I tried to find the golden fountain; 
But my only consolation 
is that I'm proud I was my captain. 

I tried to dig a golden well;
I traveled to and back from hell;
But the only thing I'm proud of,
is that I braved the fatal spell. 

I tried to take the risky stake;  
I squandered for pleasure's sake; 
But I learned my greatest lesson 
to not to dwell upon my mistake. 

For, there must be a tomorrow 
when I can mend my pain and sorrow.  
I can still set a tawny trail 
for the youngers to follow. 

April 18, 2023 

Letter To My Mother Poetry Contest (1st place)
Sponsored By: Anouchecka  Gangabissoon
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Agustin Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 12:15 AM
Wow! Congrats, Kabayan! Thanks for sharing this, making me nostalgic of my dear Mama. God bless you, and belated Happy Mother's day to your MOM.
Roger  Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 2:07 AM
Thank you very much Kabayan... Happy mother's day to your mom too... I wish I could tell you the mountains that I carry...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Very nicely done!!
Roger  Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Thank you very much dear...
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