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Dear Mother

Dear mother, please pardon me, please don't wipe me from your memory; For, the road that I have taken was not what you wanted to be. But I want to thank you still for guiding me then through the hill; Though I was often careless on my grip upon the wheel. I tried to climb the highest mountain; I tried to find the golden fountain; But my only consolation is that I'm proud I was my captain. I tried to dig a golden well; I traveled to and back from hell; But the only thing I'm proud of, is that I braved the fatal spell. I tried to take the risky stake; I squandered for pleasure's sake; But I learned my greatest lesson to not to dwell upon my mistake. For, there must be a tomorrow when I can mend my pain and sorrow. I can still set a tawny trail for the youngers to follow. April 18, 2023 Letter To My Mother Poetry Contest (1st place) Sponsored By: Anouchecka Gangabissoon

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Date: 5/17/2023 12:15:00 AM
Wow! Congrats, Kabayan! Thanks for sharing this, making me nostalgic of my dear Mama. God bless you, and belated Happy Mother's day to your MOM.
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 5/17/2023 2:07:00 AM
Thank you very much Kabayan... Happy mother's day to your mom too... I wish I could tell you the mountains that I carry...
Date: 4/18/2023 10:30:00 AM
Very nicely done!!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 4/18/2023 1:17:00 PM
Thank you very much dear...

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