Dear Mom

These are thoughts I should've shared with you many years ago,
To express my love and affection - so very much to you I owe!
Alas, I didn't tell you I loved you enough, that I'll ever rue.
The things I want to tell you now are so very long over due.

Thanks for all the pain you suffered just to give me breath,
And that time you prayed for me when I was nearing death.
I shall always remember your sweet and tender smile.
Your words of encouragement have made my life worthwhile.

I treasure the many times you shared your faith with me,
Especially hearing about His love as I sat upon your knee.
Though at times I rebelled at attending church and Sunday school,
I'm thankful for those who taught me to follow the Golden Rule.

Mom, I treasure many precious memories growing up as a lad.
I know the Great Depression sapped the resources of you and Dad.
You sacrificed so much to see us kids schooled, fed and clad,
And thanks to you, the good times far out-weighed the bad!

Though we had little worldly pelf, there was abundant love suffice.
When I faced Y's in the road, you always offered sage advice.
Though your time here on earth was, Oh, so very fleet,
I know that you have found perfect peace sitting at Jesus' feet!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Rutherford Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Frist stanza is exqisite Robert, and my favourite. Every child should read this wonderful poem. Anne
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 1:06 PM
hey Bob congrats on a great win David
Minardi Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 11:36 AM
This poem flows in rhythmic, Bob. Enjoyed it. Congratulations.
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations Bob on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Mother" contest. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 1:33 AM
Great job Bob, of momma dear, as sweet as sugar candy, love the way you talk of her, her son has worked out dandy, on ya cobber, Bob.
Ramage Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 11:15 PM
Just so touching. Just a lovely poem. I guess our parents did suffer during the depression, I forget how difficult it was for them. Congratulations on your win. Lee
Sweetheart Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 11:04 PM
Congrats Bob on an outstanding win for this wonderful write so touching and moving ..with lovely words my friend.. top notch..luv..
Taylor Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 10:48 PM
Congrats on your win, Sarge. Beautiful tribute. Well deserved win, my friend. Thanks for your kind words. Be well and best to you and Vera. Una improving every day. God bless. Ralphie
Sweetheart Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 6:35 PM
oh Bob I am breathless with this piece on Mom..and your intro quote is superb my friend.. good luck in the contest.. why is it Moms seem to know everything? soup mail..thankxxx..luv.
Gorman-Sage Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 10:22 PM
I love this one; it brings back wonderful memories of my Mom.
Ball Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 9:39 PM
What a wonderful tribute to your mom my friend. A fine write. God Bless and good luck in the contest. This is a winner for sure. JB :)
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 3:34 PM
Enjoyed reading your very interesting poetry today Bob. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 1:55 PM
A beautiful poem for your mother. I am sure she is smiling. good luck with this gem. Sounds as though we had similar happy childhoods. Joyce
Foulk Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 1:41 PM
a touching piece bob, i can see why you are like you are, mom's will do that to a son. a great write. thank you for commenting on farewell for now soupers. busy you are right, a lot of packing yet and only 3 days left till we move. this will be my last time on here as my internet keeps going out everyday, and sometimes i can't get it to work. and the 27th is my last day anyway. so thank you for all of your support that you have given me and i have enjoyed your poetry very much.
Williams Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 1:23 PM
hey Bob, sounds like a great mom you had there, best of luck, Dave
Onclaud Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 1:10 PM
so poignant and profound, robert... i miss my mother.. winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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