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Dear Mom

These are thoughts I should've shared with you many years ago, To express my love and affection - so very much to you I owe! Alas, I didn't tell you I loved you enough, that I'll ever rue. The things I want to tell you now are so very long over due. Thanks for all the pain you suffered just to give me breath, And that time you prayed for me when I was nearing death. I shall always remember your sweet and tender smile. Your words of encouragement have made my life worthwhile. I treasure the many times you shared your faith with me, Especially hearing about His love as I sat upon your knee. Though at times I rebelled at attending church and Sunday school, I'm thankful for those who taught me to follow the Golden Rule. Mom, I treasure many precious memories growing up as a lad. I know the Great Depression sapped the resources of you and Dad. You sacrificed so much to see us kids schooled, fed and clad, And thanks to you, the good times far out-weighed the bad! Though we had little worldly pelf, there was abundant love suffice. When I faced Y's in the road, you always offered sage advice. Though your time here on earth was, Oh, so very fleet, I know that you have found perfect peace sitting at Jesus' feet! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2011 4:03:00 PM
Frist stanza is exqisite Robert, and my favourite. Every child should read this wonderful poem. Anne
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Date: 8/29/2011 1:06:00 PM
hey Bob congrats on a great win David
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:36:00 AM
This poem flows in rhythmic, Bob. Enjoyed it. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/29/2011 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations Bob on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Mother" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 1:33:00 AM
Great job Bob, of momma dear, as sweet as sugar candy, love the way you talk of her, her son has worked out dandy, on ya cobber, Bob.
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:15:00 PM
Just so touching. Just a lovely poem. I guess our parents did suffer during the depression, I forget how difficult it was for them. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:04:00 PM
Congrats Bob on an outstanding win for this wonderful write so touching and moving ..with lovely words my friend.. top notch..luv..
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Date: 8/28/2011 10:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sarge. Beautiful tribute. Well deserved win, my friend. Thanks for your kind words. Be well and best to you and Vera. Una improving every day. God bless. Ralphie
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Date: 8/26/2011 6:35:00 PM
oh Bob I am breathless with this piece on Mom..and your intro quote is superb my friend.. good luck in the contest.. why is it Moms seem to know everything? soup mail..thankxxx..luv.
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:22:00 PM
I love this one; it brings back wonderful memories of my Mom.
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:39:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute to your mom my friend. A fine write. God Bless and good luck in the contest. This is a winner for sure. JB :)
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:34:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very interesting poetry today Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:55:00 PM
A beautiful poem for your mother. I am sure she is smiling. good luck with this gem. Sounds as though we had similar happy childhoods. Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:41:00 PM
a touching piece bob, i can see why you are like you are, mom's will do that to a son. a great write. thank you for commenting on farewell for now soupers. busy you are right, a lot of packing yet and only 3 days left till we move. this will be my last time on here as my internet keeps going out everyday, and sometimes i can't get it to work. and the 27th is my last day anyway. so thank you for all of your support that you have given me and i have enjoyed your poetry very much.
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:23:00 PM
hey Bob, sounds like a great mom you had there, best of luck, Dave
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:10:00 PM
so poignant and profound, robert... i miss my mother.. winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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