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Dear Milt

The sun is shining, the sky bright cerulean sea And I am writing a letter…a letter to my future me. The pandemic is over, so it’s time to pack up for a trip Hey, Milt, no time to be giving yourself any pouty lip Because you are living on borrowed time, you see, Approaching the mid-eighties, not much time left for me. I guess you are remembering the last ten years or so Some wonderful times if you recall, not many more to go You are still lonely since our wonderful Deborah died, But you have cultivated friendships, O yes, really tried. It’s good that you are still in your own home and thriving I see you are not as productive now, but you are striving I also see you have lost some of the lilt in your stride, But, time hasn’t diminished your ever present self-pride Slow down now, my future self, and let me catch up I must deal with this most recent arthritic flareup So, I’ll close this short letter and put it in the mail Hope it gets to you soon, next time I’ll add more detail. Cordially, Milt SECOND PLACE WINNER written September 19, 2021 especially for "Letter to Your Future Self" Contest sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 10/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/17/2021 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations, Milton, on your win with this excellent introspective poem. Rhyming is incredible! Brilliant! Best wishes always ~ Mala
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/17/2021 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mala. I did my best, but it was not an easy project. I'm anxious to read some of the others.
Date: 9/24/2021 2:03:00 PM
Nicely done, Milt:-) I love it! Quite introspective and life-affirming. Wow, you're aging so gracefully if your avatar is any indication! Congrats in advance, my friend.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/24/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Edward. I enjoyed writing the letter to my future self, although I wasn't quite sure what was expected. I still look like my avatar if you color the hair snow white!
Date: 9/20/2021 11:07:00 AM
I like it totally and the rhyming is incredible "I also see you have lost some of the lilt in your stride, But, time hasn’t diminished your ever present self-pride" Wow!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/20/2021 1:43:00 PM
Nope, it hasn't, Caren. I still have a good handle on my self-image, and I still love being encouraging to others.
Date: 9/19/2021 12:51:00 PM
how far in the future is this letter Milt? I enjoyed your projection.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2021 2:12:00 PM
I don't know, Nancy, I just was thinking I'll be 80 the first of December, so I think about five years??? Probably too far. Thanks.
Date: 9/19/2021 12:25:00 PM
I enjoyed your letter, Milt! Wonderfully rhymed…
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thank, Ilene. I hope I did a decent job of it!
Date: 9/19/2021 11:07:00 AM
Well written letter to self Milton, mid eighties? You don't look it. Tom PS. Hope toothache has subsided, I always use a drop of clove oil.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2021 12:08:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. The tooth was pulled, so it's no longer there, but I've had a lot of pain during the healing process. Hopeful I'm seeing light at the end of the tunnel.
Date: 9/19/2021 10:42:00 AM
You did a good job here. I had doubts about this contest but you handled it so well...Delice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2021 12:08:00 PM
Well, Delice, I'm not sure I did what was expected, it's just what came to mind. Sometimes I just wing it.
Date: 9/19/2021 9:58:00 AM
I've never seen a letter addressed to oneself before, but this one is chock-full of inner thoughts that no one can fathom. Milt, you did an excellent job.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2021 12:09:00 PM
Thanks so much for your affirmation, Lasaad. I hope so!

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