Dear Me

December 12, 2012

Dear Me,

Advice to Myself

~~~~~~~~~~~

Go through the open door
Dreams await you and more

Do not be afraid to fail
Learning in the end to tell

Life is hard, education is best
Independence is what I suggest

Some people are not always kind
Do not be rude but leave those behind

Be thankful for your blessings
Remember everything is a lesson

Be creative, experience life, be keen
Go to places you have never seen

Find your true love, your soul mate
You have time do not rush, it can wait

Changes, Suggestions to Myself

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You do not listen to your mother
This time make sure you bother

Mistakes will always happen to you
This time a different path you choose

Boyfriends come and go, here and there
Thank goodness the last one you let out for air

Next time do not believe everything you hear
Sometimes people put make believe in your ear

Please do not dye your hair pink again
Leave the natural color or put highlights in!

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All these things come with love
Whatever you do, believe in Heaven above.

Love, Me

David Williams “Hello/Goodbye” Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/8/2013 4:25:00 PM
Dear Holly, Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. an interesting way of you...xox~pd
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Date: 1/6/2013 5:39:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2013 4:16:00 AM
Intelligent and insightful, Holly...love the pink hair part!...Congrats and have a happy and blessed 2013 - Tim
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Date: 1/5/2013 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Holly!! Awesome write indeed! Good day! :)
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Date: 1/1/2013 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2013 7:36:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear poet friend Holly! Happy New Year, too! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/31/2012 4:26:00 PM
Holly congrats on your win , good advice...have a happy and peaceful New Year...David
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Date: 12/31/2012 2:13:00 PM
Big congrats Holly love and all the best for the new year xx
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Date: 12/14/2012 2:48:00 PM
wow Holly this good, very good...
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Date: 12/13/2012 10:10:00 PM
haha, I love the one about not using pink in your hair! good advice for ANYone of any age, sweetie!!
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Date: 12/13/2012 1:36:00 PM
It is good to see you entering more contests. Lots of good advice here. Good luck with entry.
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Date: 12/12/2012 10:19:00 PM
This is super advice to yourself. Follow it. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 12/12/2012 10:14:00 PM
nice' Sandy
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