Dear John...

Farewell

must go now...

best not to dwell,

when we utter love's last

farewell

An example posted as a guideline to my latest contest 'A RONDEL'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 2:09 AM
Thanks for this example, Brian. I plan to support your contest. Smiles, Dane Ann
La France Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 12:09 PM
lovely it is too.. but mine ended up being just a tad longer than that example... oh well.. cannot stop the creative flow from happening...
Hilliker Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 11:13 PM
Nice Cinqku. Thanks for sharing.
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 5:06 PM
Interesting write in this one. Keep the contest running. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 12:15 PM
well, now I gotta go check THIS one out! Gosh, how can we keep up with you,Brian!! Great title on this poem! andrea
Richards Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 11:37 AM
I look forward to trying this new challenge! Although, this lovely poem of yours will be hard to top! Nicely done again, Brian. ~ Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Great words here and super example too... thankxxx for the guideline .. enjoyed your simple yet powerful words here... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Townsend Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 9:04 AM
A sad write yet very well done. I will have to check out the new contest. Smiles from Lolita
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