Dear Jesus

Thank you for my puppy.
She never yells or leaves
She is always there for me
to sit, or play, or just to be
as if she knows my needs.

You knew that I would need her
for these lonely, angry days
to clutch and cry into her fur
outside with the blue bird
while inside, their voices raise.

Why does he have to be so mean?
It’s not her fault; she did no wrong!
He says he loves You, so make him see
what he’s doing to our family.
He hasn’t been with us that long!

He listens to You, God make him hear
make them stop, make them love;
close his mouth and open his mind, eyes, and ears
You’ve done it before, (please) do it here
make them like my puppy dog.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 23, 2016 at 9:17 PM
KARI:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~
Mitchell Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Thanks SKAT! It is certainly a pleasant surprise!
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June 21, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Kari, A well written poem about a sad subject. Congrats on the win. Lanette Kissel
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June 21, 2015 at 1:43 AM
that is very good Kari...SKAT
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June 21, 2015 at 1:05 AM
Kari, congratulations on your Prayer time Memory win. LINDA
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June 20, 2015 at 6:32 PM
A beautiful prayer...a well deserved win...congrats I wonder how often a child out there mummers something similar...to often I am afraid...thanks for shedding light on such a sad subject in such a sublime way cheers H
Mitchell Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 7:54 PM
Wow, Thank you! Yes, too often a child is forced to seek refuge outside of his/her family members.
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 7:44 AM
A very moving prayer many congrats on your top spot in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Mitchell Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Wow, thank you Jan! How fitting my first poetry win highlights the comforting and necessary aspects of prayer in life. Thanks
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June 4, 2015 at 11:35 PM
kari, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Mitchell Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Linda. With a username like "Poet Destroyer", I'm both nervous and intrigued to hear more from you! Thank you for the welcome!
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June 1, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Kari, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
A  Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 10:48 PM
I'm moved by your poem. Jesus, know how to reach each and every one of us. He gave you the puppy for a reason... HUGS
Mitchell Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 2:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, He certainly does! I wrote this poem for the contest "Prayertime Memories." Jesus was very near during my tumultuous childhood. And thanks for your warm welcome!
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