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Dear Inconsiderate

You’re always dragging on me-- got your sticky icky leavings all pver the place, any place most inconvenient. Always kind of spooky, nervous but defiant too, back up step out, get nose to nose as if to say you’re here for good. I know it’s you, at night, tasting my eyes, making me wiggle and a little itchy squirmy but never squished, somehow… One day there’s one of you, lurking in a corner, the next, a window, under floorboards, cupboards, skittering all over my floor and ceilings and in my clothes so when I undress there you are, sitting like a star right on my breast. Okay. I needed that. To scream. Whack at something so terribly invasive, biting, so terribly unobtrusive, until you leave your icky sticky leavings as bumps all over me. When were you walking over me, in the dark while I dreamed, taking over saying I’m a leaving little spider left.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/13/2014 11:19:00 PM
Sheri A very clever take on a spider invasion. Gosh, now I feel like they are crawling on me. LOL Thank you for the nice comment on my What I Gave poem
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Date: 6/25/2013 12:18:00 AM
Your poem details the daily interactions we have with spiders wonderfully, Sheri. Congratulations! David
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Date: 6/20/2013 4:49:00 PM
Wow that must have been some spider invasion. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/10/2013 1:27:00 PM
Interesting take on the spider..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your visits to my work are encouraging..Sara
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Date: 6/1/2013 3:47:00 PM
lol, enjoyed this witty write
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Date: 6/1/2013 5:34:00 AM
You are on a roll dear, should take a top spot! Light & Love
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Date: 6/1/2013 12:00:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this descriptive creative poem Sheri. I am fond of watching spider webs after the rain when they glisten in the sun, but l sure don't like them in my house or anywhere near me.
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