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Dear Humans; I'm The Earth. I'm writing to you this letter from the near future. I have many things to tell you. I don't know where to start. On the first hand, let me tell you that my agony is quicker than I thought, but you still ignore about my sickness. Good for you, because that means you don't have any empathy, so you don't suffer at all, because ignorants think they are the best. I must say the contrary. I'm really feeling terrible. Many of my babies are nearly death now, the trees, the whales, the polar bears and many others. The oceans have no fish, no dolphings jumping next to the boats, the ones that sail only for joy, not for fishing, because it's nothing to fish for. On the second hand, I tell you that the sand of the deserts is taking most of the areas where before was green. The seasons don't exist anymore. You will have what it comes: rainy days or sunny days, freezing or hot...who knows?. Maybe hot all the year or maybe cold. Snow rarelly. Springs, fountains, streams dissapeared here in this future time. The rivers have some water to wash your face, but not enough for you all to have that beautiful life you are having in those years you are living at your present. Finally, let me advise you again, that I'm in agony, I won't live for long time. I would like to say, I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon, but I know, I won't. P.S.; Just to remind you, my death will also be yours.

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Date: 11/7/2023 5:20:00 AM
wonderful, i really love your poetry, so inspiring take care. Maria
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/7/2023 6:12:00 AM
Good afternoon Yann. Thanks a lot. I'm happy you liked it. Have a nice dayxxxx
Date: 11/6/2023 1:43:00 AM
Brilliant poem. Your letter to useless humanity will not correct their evil ways. The end must be very near. Great poem. Blessings (we need them).
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/6/2023 2:36:00 AM
Good morning Victor. Yes, you are right, difficoult to change people's mentality. Thank you for your beautiful commemt. Have a great week. Blessings...!
Date: 11/5/2023 2:14:00 PM
I'm impressed with how you conveyed your message via a letter to Earth and the humans who ungratefully and erroneously inhabit it. I heard earth's pleas and am remind that individually and collectively we have a responsibility to our home. A creative and well crafted poem, Maria. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/6/2023 1:22:00 AM
Good morning Sara. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Have a great weekxxxx
Date: 11/5/2023 5:28:00 AM
Your poem adeptly captures the essence of nature's sensory experience, skillfully utilizing imaginative imagery to evoke a vivid portrayal. The possibility of these events materializing is contingent upon our collective awakening and cultivation of reverence for nature, Maria.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/5/2023 5:36:00 AM
Very true and wise words yours. We need to open our eyes, before it's too late. Thank you for stopping by. I really appreciate your comment. Have a great Sunday.
Date: 11/5/2023 1:52:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/5/2023 1:29:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comment Jeanette. Have a great day!
Date: 11/4/2023 8:21:00 PM
It could happen if we all don't wake up and learn to respect nature, Maria. Thanks for the reminder to think before we act wasteful. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/5/2023 1:27:00 AM
Hi Bill. Thank you so much for passing by. Have a great Sunday my friendxxx

Book: Shattered Sighs