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You can hang upside down as a bat you could dive into the abyss of silence you could swallow all the keys and get stuck you could hear the sea calling your name revere the luscious azure skies admire its assured and relaxed paddling. You can stay locked in the medicine cabinet you can drink as much as you wish and do whatever you need to do to stay you can do what you need to do, love or hate or alter the world's name to yours. Dear heart my calm follows your heartbeat even if you break, I'll moor you alike the historic tales, my spirit remains you retain my blood flowing and me living to survive, we battled bravely. You can say goodbye to yourself in the mirror you can despise what you have inherited It's okay to feel dead in a throbbing city It's okay to be a whale who never comes up for air.   There might be grief hidden behind your smile there might be tears behind your laughter realize that you have my unwavering support. I will cherish you for the rest of my life. because you gave me something I couldn't buy: love.
Written: January 28, 2023 DEAR HEART Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 1/29/2023 6:37:00 AM
Wonderfully lauding the love and longings of heart. Enjoyed your poem, my friend. Best to you.
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Date: 1/29/2023 2:17:00 AM
Can't but agree with Valsa. Your ending couplet is a masterpiece.
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Date: 1/29/2023 12:31:00 AM
"I will cherish you for the rest of my life. because you gave me something I couldn't buy: love."... Wow! I love the conclusion ! A beautifully written poem in your unique style. I always feel that you wear your heart on your sleeve .Your poems overflow with powerful emotions. All the Best dear Lasaad.
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