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Dear Frosted Dove

With crystal, adorn each mirror on Earth. Let reflected gloaming awake their stone. Dear frosted dove, we desire their rebirth. May forevermore flow through every bone. Where pathos is our most enormous dearth. Would you be valiant to salvage their throne? Mankind is in a melancholy strife. Stop hiding your unpredictable life. ~ Contest: Eight Word Challenge-3 Sponsor: John Hamilton Words required: 1. Crystal 2. Gloaming 3. Frosted 4. Forevermore 5. Pathos 6. Valiant 7. Melancholy 8. Unpredictable Written On: August 12th, 2017 Won: 10th Place

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Date: 9/13/2017 7:08:00 AM
You did really well here to use all those words..
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 9/13/2017 9:50:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One! :)
Date: 8/20/2017 2:33:00 PM
Congratulations on this recognition of a lovely poem Alyssa.
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/21/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thanks, Dean! :)
Date: 8/19/2017 8:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win Alyssa
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/19/2017 9:40:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph! :)
Date: 8/19/2017 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Alyssa. Beautiful poem! :)
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/19/2017 9:39:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! :)
Date: 8/19/2017 7:27:00 PM
Really well done Alyssa, nice placement thanks for your entry!
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/19/2017 9:39:00 PM
Thanks, John! :)
Date: 8/12/2017 6:10:00 PM
Well done, I love "where forevermore flow though every bone". Good luck in the contest.
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Alyssa Lorette
Date: 8/13/2017 12:21:00 AM
Thank you once again! :)

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