Alyssa Lorette Poet Ottava rima

Dear Frosted Dove

With crystal, adorn each mirror on Earth.
Let reflected gloaming awake their stone.
Dear frosted dove, we desire their rebirth.
May forevermore flow through every bone.
Where pathos is our most enormous dearth.
Would you be valiant to salvage their throne?
Mankind is in a melancholy strife.
Stop hiding your unpredictable life.
~
Contest: Eight Word Challenge-3
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Words required: 1. Crystal 2. Gloaming 3. Frosted 4. Forevermore 5. Pathos 6. Valiant 7. Melancholy  8. Unpredictable
Written On: August 12th, 2017
Won: 10th Place

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Silent One September 13, 2017 at 7:08 AM You did really well here to use all those words.. Alyssa Lorette September 13, 2017 at 9:50 PM Thanks, Silent One! :)

Dean Wood August 20, 2017 at 2:33 PM Congratulations on this recognition of a lovely poem Alyssa. Alyssa Lorette August 21, 2017 at 8:50 AM Thanks, Dean! :)

Joseph May August 19, 2017 at 8:13 PM Congrats on your win Alyssa Alyssa Lorette August 19, 2017 at 9:40 PM Thanks, Joseph! :)

Susan Ashley August 19, 2017 at 7:46 PM Congratulations on your placement Alyssa. Beautiful poem! :) Alyssa Lorette August 19, 2017 at 9:39 PM Thank you, Susan! :)

John Hamilton August 19, 2017 at 7:27 PM Really well done Alyssa, nice placement thanks for your entry! Alyssa Lorette August 19, 2017 at 9:39 PM Thanks, John! :)

Sean Kibble August 12, 2017 at 6:10 PM Well done, I love "where forevermore flow though every bone". Good luck in the contest. Alyssa Lorette August 13, 2017 at 12:21 AM Thank you once again! :)