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dear dude at the bar

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dear dude at the bar

Don't slide your arm around my shoulder
unless you want yours to be dislocated
Don't try to tell me I'm beautiful
trust me it's overstated and overrated
Don't ask me if you can get me a shot
I'll probably give you some lip
not the kind your thinking though
more like replying with will you make it hollow tip?
Don't try to tell me you'll take me 
to places I've never been
Like where an abandon warehouse
covered in plastic is that what you intend?
Trust me it's for your own good so just stay on over there
cuz i don't always play well with others
and i never said the game was fair
a million others just like you sweet talking all the time
the same words to all the girls dumb enough to fall behind
Now this is nothing personal your not the first to try
I'm sorry it has to be this way but your just another guy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 7/31/2017 5:40:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, well I m also a boy, but what you did was absolutely right, never trust someone, especially not someone you don t know, well when a man is drunk, he can do anything so it s always best to avoid them and maintain your distance, I m glad that such things aren t in Pakistan as we are muslims and we all respect women secondly wine is prohibted in Islam, the best thing about Islam is that women are respected but still good bad people live in every community,
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:41:00 PM
yeah guys are irritating when they drink to much
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Date: 1/21/2017 6:32:00 PM
WOW this powerful poem sure packed a punch Aunna - you told him straight lol!:-) hugs Jan xx
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