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For the  The Bruised Bird Poetry Contest of Robert James Liguori

Premiere Contest WinnerDear Cheesesteak, Sweet Parakeet

Oh, my sweet parakeet, Cheesesteak,
I cannot bear to see you in this state -
your beautiful black and white feathers
all ruffled, no more to ever flutter;
your cold dead bruised body left here mercilessly
ravaged by the claws of my black cat, Stella -
Stella, the stealthy predator
who already massacred other birds of mine.

Who can fathom the mind of a cat
whose soft fur and purr are so precious,
yet whose attacks on innocent creatures
are so ruthless?
Such a strange and awful paradox it is -
that sweetness can display such savagery.

Dear Cheesesteak, your singing still
reverberates inside my mind.
My darling bird, who never harmed another,
nothing can I do
but bury you and say a little prayer
that you are safe in the rainbow realm
where all good pets go.

Sing, Cheesesteak, sing.
And fly with your pretty little wings
among the heaven’s clouds.
One day again, I’ll be seeing you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Carmack Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 7:06 PM
Since Stella will probably be heading up there before the rest of us, I just hope we don't get up there to see that Stella did it again! :o
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Humor and sadness mix…beautiful feathers, sing sweet bird…lol… Congratulations on this fab write!
Jabbar Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 4:53 AM
Loved your poem, you have such a beautiful skill
Ashley Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 3:06 PM
Aww, dear Andrea, this is breathtaking in its heartfelt, introspective sentimentality. Such love pours forth onto the poetic page for Cheesesteak as if she was your own parakeet. You captured her in death with awesome poetic finesse. I especially loved “Who can fathom the mind of a cat”? The whole stanza is so defining in the demise of Cheesesteak. Congratulations for your shining trophy win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:29 PM
So nice of you to say. Thanks
Guptar Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations, dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a beautiful tribute to a bruised bird. It is emotional from beginning to end. Particularly liked the concluding stanza, which ends on a spiritual note. Wishing you a delightful weekend, crafting your gems.
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:28 PM
Thank you
Sharma Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 9:11 PM
Great, congratulations. Happy Diwali!!
Miller Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 6:26 AM
Good one Andrea, congratulations
Liguori Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 3:46 AM
Congrats Andrea! I read your poem at least FIVE times ;) ;) and felt it had to be first! What a tribute you have given Cheesesteak!!! Thank you so much.
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 9:46 AM
Thanks, Robert. I really wanted to see it from your perspective. It's difficult to lose our pets
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 7:37 PM
"Cheesesteak" grabbed my attention right away --- milk and meat together being a BIG NO-NO for the feline kosher consumer. lol.
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Haha. I kept thinking the name was cheesecake and I had to correct my poem
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 2:48 PM
an engaging and gentle poem about Cheesecake's untimely demise at the 'paws of Stella. Your kindness and compassionate for Cheesecake is inspiration...great contest entry
Poet Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Andrea, your passion burns with a fervor that captivates and inspires. A delicate yet passionate aversion to cruelty. Best for a win
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 2:22 AM
- You have told the story through Robert's eyes, Andrea, I'm sure he will love this :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 9:47 AM
I hope he feels that way about the poem. Thanks, Anne-Lise
George Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 9:36 PM
Cheesecake is a sweet name. Cats are soft and gentle. But when it comes to hunting small creatures, it is merciless. I too had a similar experience when I owned cats. But ever since my younger son when he was just three was scratched by our cat and had to take anti rabies injections, my husband doesn't permit to keep a cat at my home. A story touchingly narrated.
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Thanks, Valsa. We had a sweet Aussie dog with an unfortunate behavior. Every time my spouse sneezed she would jump at Joe's face. I know she was trying to be protective. We couldn't get her to stop it. My husband is nearly bedridden so he got scratched a lot , even bitten a little by her doing this. Our grandkids live with us now, and one is allergic to dogs, so we had to find a new home for our sweet dog. I let them know of her reaction to sneezes!!
Hind Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Oh, so sad!! Yes, hope you can see her again.
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 7:39 PM
I am writing as Robert , the sponsor of this contest whose parakeet died.
Kerr Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 1:09 PM
Hello Andrea, Your work compels the most profound admiration from me. A discreet yet strongly worded condemnation of cruelty. I can’t thank you enough for your interesting words on Above This World and Natural World Tapestry Howard
Goldsmith Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 12:28 PM
WOW!!! What a write/story you have here. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away................
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