Smita Kulkarni Poet Ode

Dear Casimir

Dear Casimir…

You brighten my day by your shiny little sweet face
You make me lose myself in your brown eyes of blueish shades
You bring bliss to me with your cheerful inquisitiveness
You create paradise for me with you innocent performances

Silky brown Curls of yours make me exultant
Innocent sweet babbles of yours make me vibrant
Tiny stumbling feet of yours walk with so much vigor
Sparkling, big eyes of yours look at everything with curious care 

Very unique kind of an extrovert joy you taught me to feel
I forget myself in your presence by becoming a juvenile

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Paul Callus July 10, 2021 at 3:44 AM This is such a lovely ode, Smita! Children fill our lives with pride and happiness, and with pain sometimes, too. Where would we be without them!! My daughter will have her birthday in a week's time. ~ Regards // paul Smita Kulkarni July 14, 2021 at 2:47 PM Yes Paul, we love our children dearly! Happy birthday to your daughter!!

Andrea Dietrich July 9, 2021 at 2:46 PM oh what a dear person this is describing. love your descriptiveness! Smita Kulkarni July 14, 2021 at 2:46 PM Thank you Andrea!!

Supraja Kannan July 8, 2021 at 2:03 AM Such a beautiful ode... So true, children are the angels ... Lovely write... Smita Kulkarni July 14, 2021 at 2:46 PM They truly are angels! Thanks Supraja!

Duke Beaufort July 7, 2021 at 2:29 PM So, you have a wonderful mind and acceptance of what everyone has to offer....even the children. You are indeed in love with life and can live a happy life no matter what happens. What a lovely outlook you have. You have given me some joy here. I also want to thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me. Smita Kulkarni July 14, 2021 at 2:46 PM Thank you Duke for your encouraging comments. I enjoyed reading them.

Victor Buhagiar July 6, 2021 at 9:15 PM Children are our joy. My only daughter will have her birthday this month. It will be enjoyable I'm sure. Smita Kulkarni July 7, 2021 at 1:01 PM That's right Victor! Happy birthday to your daughter!! Enjoy the celebration!!

Joseph P. DiMino July 6, 2021 at 4:19 PM Beautiful writing! I have learned some very large lessons about love, from sizes much smaller than myself. Thank you so much for sharing. Smita Kulkarni July 6, 2021 at 5:58 PM You are absolutely right about that Joe!! Thanks for visiting!

Anitha Jayasankar July 5, 2021 at 9:45 PM A lovely ode to the little one you adore dear Smitha... I too love being with children, listening to their babbles... God bless... Hugs... ~ Ani Smita Kulkarni July 6, 2021 at 11:40 AM Thank you Ani! Children do have amazing powers to keep us joyful while we are with them!!

Joanna Daniel July 5, 2021 at 8:51 PM Children make us forget our troubles and true, your love shines for your little one through this wonderful ode, Smita:) Smita Kulkarni July 6, 2021 at 11:39 AM Thank you Jo. Children do make us forget our troubles by their innocent babbles and interactions!!

Besma Riabi Dziri July 5, 2021 at 1:08 AM Much beauty and much Love into words that reach the heart and enliven the soul.. thank you so much, Smita for sharing your joy and blessings into your poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings. Smita Kulkarni July 6, 2021 at 11:37 AM Thank you Besma! True love and joy from the heart pours out such words :)

Gershon Wolf July 4, 2021 at 5:40 PM A classic ode, tribute to how our little ones restore and refresh our enthusiasm for the bloom of new life. Thoroughly enjoyed, Smita! ~ Gershon Smita Kulkarni July 6, 2021 at 11:36 AM Thank you Gershon!! The little ones bring so much joy to us!!

Vijay Pandit July 4, 2021 at 2:45 PM This ode is so sweet, Smita. Much joy you derive from being there watching tiny movements and listening to babbles. Enjoy the feeling! I see the images in your write. Smita Kulkarni July 6, 2021 at 11:35 AM Thank you Vijay! Children do magic on us!!