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Dear Cactus

Dear Cactus, understood I your real worth, While shielding you from disdain’s cruel mirth. On the plant rack, I placed you so low, Just to save you from eyes that do not know. Running from thorns, can we possibly dare? Denying truths that we can hardly bear. As water sprinkled and fell on your prickly form, You soaked up and grew slow, far from the norm. But with time you’ve sprouted strong and free, Yet labelled by some as a wretched misery! In dirt and scorching heat, you proudly rise, With a spark of endurance in your unyielding eyes. Resilient and tall under the wildly sunny sky, Teaching lessons to one and all as time goes by. As thorns linger, we are sure to find, Growth and adversity gleefully intertwined.

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Date: 1/21/2024 4:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Sspriha Agarwal
Date: 1/21/2024 9:03:00 PM
Awww, thank you so much for your warm welcome :)
Date: 1/18/2024 8:56:00 AM
Dear Sspriha, like life, the cactus can bring both pleasure and pain. And like us, the cactus faces challenges to overcome. Your beautiful poem is rich and deep in both imageries and metaphors that are delightful, creative and thought-provoking. Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Sspriha Agarwal
Date: 1/18/2024 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your wishes :)

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