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Dear Brother

Five years ago we were together In the war cold was the weather You cared for me but I didn’t bother It was very dark the enemy getting closer “Take care of the family run I will cover” Then a gun fire, a painful cry it was over You died for me why oh dear brother The sun was up the war far gone Troops going home and I was alone Stiff I was just like a stone For I knew the family had no bone As I was leaving the bloody war zone I told my self “what is done is done” I saw your wife calm as a dove Holding your picture high above Then mama asked, “Is your brother alive” I told them….; mama couldn’t believe Your wife in pain could only say “oh my love” I couldn’t stay I had to leave I was brutal selfish person ever Mama was always in tears like a river Always drunk making your lives bitter But you were there to make me better Looking at your face I would say never The truth is you where the family’s last silver My life has become a loosing game I work hard to bring a happy flame But everything I do is so lame For am not you things won’t be the same Their eyes say “your death I am to blame” Either ways you are more alive than I AM….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/19/2016 3:13:00 PM
You made the pain of war real for me and I saw the tragic change it made in your life. I myself have never served. On the one hand I regret that decision and wish the experiences were part of my own makeup, but on the other hand I'm glad I never suffered the consequences of serving. Thank you for this poem.
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Date: 8/16/2016 11:24:00 AM
Nise One, family poem, David , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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David Luoga
Date: 8/16/2016 4:35:00 PM
thank you..! i appreciate that ,, i would like to be your friend too.. your poems are great
Date: 8/16/2016 6:18:00 AM
Very touching ... nicely written ...
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David Luoga
Date: 8/16/2016 4:13:00 PM
thank you

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