Dear Brother

Five years ago we were together
In the war cold was the weather
You cared for me but I didn’t bother
It was very dark the enemy getting closer
“Take care of the family run I will cover”
Then a gun fire, a painful cry it was over
You died for me why oh dear brother


The sun was up the war far gone
Troops going home and I was alone
Stiff I was just like a stone
For I knew the family had no bone
As I was leaving the bloody war zone
I told my self “what is done is done”


I saw your wife calm as a dove
Holding your picture high above
Then mama asked, “Is your brother alive”
I told them….; mama couldn’t believe
Your wife in pain could only say “oh my love”
I couldn’t stay I had to leave


I was brutal selfish person ever
Mama was always in tears like a river
Always  drunk making your lives bitter
But you were there to make me better
Looking at your face I would say never
The truth is you where the family’s last silver


My life has become a loosing game
I work hard to bring a happy flame
But everything I do is so lame
For am not you things won’t be the same
Their eyes say “your death I am to blame”
Either ways you are more alive than I AM….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 8/19/2016 3:13:00 PM
You made the pain of war real for me and I saw the tragic change it made in your life. I myself have never served. On the one hand I regret that decision and wish the experiences were part of my own makeup, but on the other hand I'm glad I never suffered the consequences of serving. Thank you for this poem.
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Date: 8/16/2016 11:24:00 AM
Nise One, family poem, David , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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David Luoga
Date: 8/16/2016 4:35:00 PM
thank you..! i appreciate that ,, i would like to be your friend too.. your poems are great
Date: 8/16/2016 6:18:00 AM
Very touching ... nicely written ...
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David Luoga
Date: 8/16/2016 4:13:00 PM
thank you
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