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Dear Boy With the Brown Eyes

Dear boy with the brown eyes I was wondering where you were tonight If you were going about town With some cute girl in your arms Dear boy with the brown eyes I wouldn't mind, oh how could I mind When we are but thousands of miles apart Calm this senseless beating of my heart Dear boy with the brown eyes Don't you dare promise the moon and stars For my heart, oh this heart of mine Couldn't help but wish you were true Dear boy with the brown eyes With the jazz and alcohol that drowns me Tonight I long for unadulterated romance You are the illusion I hold on to as truth Dear boy with the brown eyes Will you ever be more than a convenient dream? Reach out your hand to touch me Let me know, let me know you are real

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/17/2017 11:27:00 AM

Nice write; I've enjoyed reading it -JT

Jan Allison

Date: 6/15/2017 6:32:00 AM

I hope this dream turns into reality Bianca - so full of longing, a lovely romantic write:-) hugs Jan xx

Bianca Reyes
Date: 7/18/2017 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Always hoping for the dream. Xx :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 5/20/2017 10:00:00 AM

could i be the one....i have the brownest eyes under the sun....could i be your fate....i offer all the passion you can take....could i be this answer to your dreams....because we do have thousands of miles in between....the man with the brown eyes....just woke up to this wonderful surprise....that was a Beautiful and inspiring selection bianca....;)

Bianca Reyes
Date: 5/21/2017 2:18:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words eric. I enjoyed all the words you shared. It is as if those are the words one wishes the inspiration behind this poem thinks when he, by fate, randomly comes across this poem. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/11/2017 2:33:00 PM

Hello Blanca,nice to meet you.I want to tell you,your poem is beautiful. I think you re interested in the boy with the brown eyes. a7

Bianca Reyes
Date: 5/11/2017 11:48:00 PM

Nice to meet you Darlene. Thank you fo your kind words. :) i'm interested in a boy who is a dream. That's the dilemma.