Dear Boy With the Brown Eyes

Dear boy with the brown eyes
I was wondering where you were tonight
If you were going about town
With some cute girl in your arms

Dear boy with the brown eyes
I wouldn't mind, oh how could I mind
When we are but thousands of miles apart
Calm this senseless beating of my heart

Dear boy with the brown eyes
Don't you dare promise the moon and stars
For my heart, oh this heart of mine
Couldn't help but wish you were true

Dear boy with the brown eyes
With the jazz and alcohol that drowns me
Tonight I long for unadulterated romance
You are the illusion I hold on to as truth

Dear boy with the brown eyes
Will you ever be more than a convenient dream?
Reach out your hand to touch me
Let me know, let me know you are real

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/17/2017 11:27:00 AM
Nice write; I've enjoyed reading it -JT
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Date: 6/15/2017 6:32:00 AM
I hope this dream turns into reality Bianca - so full of longing, a lovely romantic write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Bianca Reyes
Date: 7/18/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Jan. Always hoping for the dream. Xx :)
Date: 5/20/2017 10:00:00 AM
could i be the one....i have the brownest eyes under the sun....could i be your fate....i offer all the passion you can take....could i be this answer to your dreams....because we do have thousands of miles in between....the man with the brown eyes....just woke up to this wonderful surprise....that was a Beautiful and inspiring selection bianca....;)
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Bianca Reyes
Date: 5/21/2017 2:18:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words eric. I enjoyed all the words you shared. It is as if those are the words one wishes the inspiration behind this poem thinks when he, by fate, randomly comes across this poem. :)
Date: 5/11/2017 2:33:00 PM
Hello Blanca,nice to meet you.I want to tell you,your poem is beautiful. I think you re interested in the boy with the brown eyes. a7
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Bianca Reyes
Date: 5/11/2017 11:48:00 PM
Nice to meet you Darlene. Thank you fo your kind words. :) i'm interested in a boy who is a dream. That's the dilemma.
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