Dear Barrack Obama

If you wants me point of view
this will have to do
It just what I see

to Obama I make this statement
while you clean the pavement
just a note from me

I don't know why 
I didn't like ether guy
so I didn't vote you see

to a party I'm not dependent
I've always been Independent
free thinker I be

so senserly Obama
I didn't dis your mama
thats not who I be

and I didn't think it cool
when they talk of gene pool
you are a man to me

they called you a terroris
I thought it hilarious
you? na I can't see

I've known in my heart
I see you play the part
American is who you be

I know you know what's up
but sometimes you realy mess up
no one is perfect you see

they put money on the pedistal
when you talk of medical
for heath care for me

but our country is getting pour
so I know we can't a 4
I never have you see

I realy got depressed
when I had no business left
no bail out for me!

I don't mean to knock it
but without money in my pocket
I really wasn't happy

I don't have a chance
so with my empty pants 
pour I guess I'll be

do what you can
or I vote republican
no tie's for me

so when other's lie
just show me you try
do it where I can see

and nothing will compair
if you show me you care
and there'll be a vote from me!

by Capt. Mike

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/25/2011 12:42:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Captain. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 3/25/2011 6:15:00 AM
A very heartfelt letter, from one Captain to Another.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad