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Landscape Ocean Shore Sea Green Grass, Spring Flowers Dunmore East ...

how I yearn for July
      and that fat summer sun
   the long sunny days
         and the eves' sultry fun
but sweet April's weep
      while it runs to the rills
   is a soft song of spring-tide
         as it splashes and spills ...
no, I can't rush dear April -
      it's gone much too soon ...

oh the gorged summer days
      ever stretched in the past
   rife with play and carefree
         yes, I prayed they would last
yet, now each dawning day
      finds a mockingbird's song
   and I've waited that warbling
         sweet psalm, far too long ...
no, I can't rush dear April -
      it's gone much too fast ...

how June swells with romance
      - thrilling hopes for July
   mischief made 'midst the dunes
         with the moon winking, high
still, now peepers' songs
      ravage late-winter's gloom
   and branches sway, heavy
         with buds bound to bloom
no, I can't rush dear April -
      (though May's drawing nigh) ...

oh I love nothing more
      than a summertime, fair
   all the hazy and crazy
         days - devil-may-care
but a crispy spring morning
      while birds chant their love
   is a rare blessing, born
         from the heavens above
no, I can't rush dear April -
      I'm too fond of that air ...
   too brief are those days
         and the joys I find there
its breath lifts my spirit
      and soft-tousles my hair
   oh I'll never get bored
         with dear April, quite rare ...
no, I'll never be bored
      with dear April ...

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Date: 4/8/2021 10:39:00 AM
"it's breath lifts my spirit" is truly a memorable line, Gregory, filled with the very expectation April promises! well done, my friend!
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Date: 4/8/2021 10:12:00 AM
This is indeed a masterpiece and one that gives such beautifully deep inspiration my friend! Every verse a golden and true expression that sings of April's beauty and the poet's heart and soul, imho. A fav- a true and gleaming gem too. God bless...
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Date: 4/6/2021 9:49:00 PM
Romantical, gorgeous, and I knew immediately it was a Greg Barden adventure! You have such a flair, my poetic friend! "how June swells with romance - thrilling hopes for July mischief made 'midst the dunes with the moon winking, high" Wow!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/8/2021 4:55:00 AM
This is such a sweet ande thoughtful comment, Caren - thank you so very much! Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Date: 4/6/2021 8:30:00 PM
I loved this poem, Gregory, and the illustration, both were so lovely.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/8/2021 4:54:00 AM
Thank you so very kindly, my friend - much appreciated! :o)
Date: 4/6/2021 7:48:00 PM
So beautiful!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/8/2021 4:54:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! :o) <3

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