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Dealing With Healing

When we’re dealing with healing, It’s very revealing To show how we’re feeling because As time keeps on drifting And cells may be shifting, Our mood might be lifting its claws. Acceptance and practice To deal with what whacked us Can help to distract us and pause All the negative notions (Of which there are oceans) To hopeful emotions. Applause!

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Terry Flood

Date: 7/21/2023 4:44:00 PM

I absolutely love the rhymes you found here Ilene. All perfect and none seemingly contrived. Perfection, as all your rhymes are. Hope you’re healing well and rapidly. Terry

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/20/2023 6:59:00 PM

Dealing with healing can be distracting when too inundated with life's trivial details. They need to let go, release and embrace.

Terrell Martin

Date: 7/20/2023 7:48:00 AM

Ilene, well done! I LOVE the rhyming scheme in this uplifting little poem. And the optimistic overtone is exactly what we need in these less than utopian times. Write on, Terrell

Deb M

Date: 7/19/2023 7:43:00 PM

Hi Ilene….really enjoyed this poem and its positive outlook….Debx

Lin Lane

Date: 7/19/2023 7:26:00 PM

Having a positive attitude about healing, or anything else, will always help the healing process... physical or otherwise. Good write, Ilene.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2023 5:23:00 PM

Cathartic write!