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Deadly Silence

The woods were still and without sound,
The night I hid her in the ground.

For Susan’s Silence contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 29, 2012 at 9:45 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

August 26, 2012 at 3:22 PM

So that's where u hid the body!! You told on yourself!! haha...Congrats on a fun spirited and creative entry! Always nice to see your work at the top! gwendolen

Tim Ryerson

August 26, 2012 at 1:53 PM

Wow, Jack!...really unique idea for the contest!... hope you covered your tracks carefully and don't get caught!...Congratulations - Tim

Barbara Gorelick

August 26, 2012 at 12:17 PM

this is SOOOO good..congrats. I had to smile at how horrid it was....lol BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 26, 2012 at 11:09 AM

congrats Jack on first place win for an eerie offering luv..very creative ..

Dinda Minardi

August 26, 2012 at 7:02 AM

A very creepy poem, Jack. You sounded more like Poe.. ;) Congrats on the hge win :D

Dinda Minardi

August 26, 2012 at 7:05 AM

huge win :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

August 26, 2012 at 6:27 AM

wooooh creepy ,sooooo good xx

Bukang Liwayway

August 25, 2012 at 11:18 PM

congratulations Jack!! great poet!!

Poet Destroyer A

August 25, 2012 at 9:06 PM

JACK;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

Poet Destroyer A

August 25, 2012 at 8:28 PM

Jack;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

Lee Ramage

August 25, 2012 at 5:33 PM

I'll say its deadly, well done. Congratulations on this first place win. Lee

Joy Wellington

August 25, 2012 at 4:45 PM

Congrats Jack, your first place Couplet is a well deserved winner. One love. Joy Wells

Vicky Tsiluma

August 25, 2012 at 3:48 PM

Congrats on your win Jack. Witty!

Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2012 at 2:11 PM

Super congrats..((()))!!!!Sara

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2012 at 12:45 PM

i just knew it. I knew this would appeal to Susan's "dark" side. BIG CONGRATS. Wish I'd thought of it.

Kim Merryman

August 25, 2012 at 12:11 PM

This was chilling, Jack. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love,Kim

Bukang Liwayway

August 25, 2012 at 12:09 PM

congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (^_^) have a nice day

Cynthia Alvez

August 25, 2012 at 11:04 AM

Congratulations on being #1 Cynthia

Joyce Johnson

August 25, 2012 at 11:00 AM

Memories of Jack the Ripper. Big congratulations Jack for your exciting win. Love, Joyce

Terry O'Leary

August 25, 2012 at 10:22 AM

Nice imagery... Congratulations on your win, my friend! Terry

Doreen Wright

August 17, 2012 at 10:32 PM

This made my heart beat fast! Cool couplet!

Andrea Dietrich

August 15, 2012 at 8:29 PM

I LOVE this, how did I miss all these new poems of yours?? I think Susan will love this one too. It's very unique.

Sara Kendrick

August 14, 2012 at 2:52 PM

Only the sound of the scraping of the shovel against the dirt..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like a winning entry in Susan's contest...Thanks for stopping by..Sara