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Deadly Shoe

There was a charming prince searching for a bride He wants Cinderella to be his future wife She rushed home before midnight and the prince goes for a tag But he stumbled on her shoe and the stairs broke his head And poor Cinderella must clean the chimney for life For "Show me the Funny contest" by Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/8/2013 1:30:00 PM
Shirley, love the twist on the plot. It gave me a laugh. Thanks for your comment and good luck in the contest.
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/8/2013 9:44:00 PM
Hi Russel..thank you for dropping by and wishing me luck..I'm glad I brought you laughter.. :D
Date: 7/8/2013 11:49:00 AM
Interesting contest entry..Good luck...I enjoyed reading this one today..Some people seem to be like that Cinderella just can't seem to win..Thanks for your visit to my work..Glad that you got a chuckle..Sara
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/8/2013 9:45:00 PM
Hi Sara.. :D guess I'm a bit satirical in this poem..haha..thank you for your kind words.. ;)
Date: 7/8/2013 10:14:00 AM
That was a nice new twist on d tale, gah fun! Gud poem! Pls read my latest wil u.:)
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/8/2013 11:00:00 AM
Thank you for visiting my work and giving my twist a shout..Zaynub.. :D
Date: 7/8/2013 8:10:00 AM
HA! It's all the chimney's fault! :) Too cute, Shirley!
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Drake Eszes
Date: 7/8/2013 1:41:00 PM
I'm ok with it NOT being that kind of story. ;-)
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/8/2013 8:20:00 AM
LOL Drake..I guess this is a "happily Never after - not so disney" story eh? :P