Shirley Candy Poet Limerick

Deadly Shoe

There was a charming prince searching for a bride
He wants Cinderella to be his future wife
She rushed home before midnight and the prince goes for a tag
But he stumbled on her shoe and the stairs broke his head
And poor Cinderella must clean the chimney for life




For "Show me the Funny contest" 
by Andrea Dietrich

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Russell Smith July 8, 2013 at 1:30 PM Shirley, love the twist on the plot. It gave me a laugh. Thanks for your comment and good luck in the contest. Shirley Candy July 8, 2013 at 9:44 PM Hi Russel..thank you for dropping by and wishing me luck..I'm glad I brought you laughter.. :D

Sara Kendrick July 8, 2013 at 11:49 AM Interesting contest entry..Good luck...I enjoyed reading this one today..Some people seem to be like that Cinderella just can't seem to win..Thanks for your visit to my work..Glad that you got a chuckle..Sara Shirley Candy July 8, 2013 at 9:45 PM Hi Sara.. :D guess I'm a bit satirical in this poem..haha..thank you for your kind words.. ;)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 8, 2013 at 10:14 AM That was a nice new twist on d tale, gah fun! Gud poem! Pls read my latest wil u.:) Shirley Candy July 8, 2013 at 11:00 AM Thank you for visiting my work and giving my twist a shout..Zaynub.. :D

Poet Tacito July 8, 2013 at 8:10 AM HA! It's all the chimney's fault! :) Too cute, Shirley! Poet Tacito July 8, 2013 at 1:41 PM I'm ok with it NOT being that kind of story. ;-) Shirley Candy July 8, 2013 at 8:20 AM LOL Drake..I guess this is a "happily Never after - not so disney" story eh? :P