Deadly Pretender

Preying not praying
Carnivore posing as plant
Death without warning




Entered in Carolyn Devonshire's " Praying Mantis" contest 5th place

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Date: 7/12/2010 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Praying Mantis Haiku's". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:51:00 PM
And he can twist his head and he has honest to God pupils, not a thousand eyes and he can fly, too. He is along with the dragonfly and the bumblebee, the astounding creatures in the insect world. I love your title. You have caught some of his lethal elegance, Regards, Gerard
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Date: 7/10/2010 9:24:00 AM
Indeed most insects are dead before they even know what hit them! Congrat's on your win Joyce!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/9/2010 12:09:00 PM
Unique take on the photo, Joyce. congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/8/2010 10:31:00 PM
Hey, congratulations, Joyce!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/8/2010 10:15:00 PM
Congratulation on being one of the winners on Carolyn's contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 7/8/2010 8:29:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Mantis contest.. way to go .. enjoy.. with luv..
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Date: 7/8/2010 8:28:00 PM
Neat play on the words prey and pray, Joyce! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/7/2010 8:12:00 PM
OOh scary! I've never seen one.
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:05:00 AM
Great entry, dear. Good luck in the contest. I am sure it will do well. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/7/2010 4:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Joyce. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 8:35:00 PM
And that's the terrible truth-Loved it, good luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:12:00 PM
Good luck .. this is excellent as usual Joyce.. have to check this contest out.. been sooooo busy... the village is on Forbidden Island 30 miles away from the Big Island.. I posted a new blog with some photos ..from our vacation.. we have hundreds ..so will post them a little at a time.. if u want a little taste of the island magic again.. AlohA..
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:34:00 PM
Oh, good one. the first line rocks. BG
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:16:00 PM
Great descriptive Haiku of the insect..Scary looking to me ...Keep the creative writes flowing..Sara
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