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Deadly Nightshade

He lingers there, suspended in air
with one eye blue and one green,
bulbous nose, long pointed toes
and nails shaped like castor beans.

His see-through skin is so thin
it glimmers an eye-popping sheen-
resembles whey, neither white nor grey
but shimmers somewhere in between.

Intestines twine like twisted vines
backed by a neon purple spleen.
His chest is bright, flashes a light
with a rotating, multi-hued beam.

His mouth, a red smear, wears a leer.
One eye shines with a feral gleam.
My throat is tight, frozen in fright,
momentarily unable to scream.

My mouth is so dry I can barely cry,
"Oh God, let this be a dream.
Please . . . let it be a dream."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/3/2014 3:55:00 PM
Cona, Exceptionally well-done work here!! I enjoyed this piece immensely!! I see that you have already quite a collection of poems. I will be reading more of your works and certainly invite you to return to mine as you wish too. Again, Great Work here, and it's a "7." Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 10/4/2014 7:30:00 AM
Thanks, Gary. Halloween time again. Time whizzes by much too fast these days. Not enough time to write. Your comments much appreciated. I'll be visiting your page too.
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