Deadlocked

Deadlocked
What tipped the scales
what has caused the rift,
the straw that added the extra
weight...Or was it a feather?

Have the lights gone out, has the grid
finally, broke?
Leaving us again depending
on God; And his scary Revelations.!

Clutching our blankets for heat.
We wait for man to repair that
which he has put in place to fail.

Whatever can go wrong, will go wrong
for sure. 
We used to know that before
we stopped misplacing our convictions.

When neighbors knew, it was all or none;
When rent-parties and waistline parties,
were how we got through the worse days.

But now we just yell “save yourselves”;
Pack-up some pillows;
Grab your smartphones and outrun 
the storm until your gas has finished;
Or until no--one accepts
your money for a bottle of clean water.

When shops are closed and the super wealthy has
Imposed upon you, their plan; 
Plans which separates, God from man.
Leaving you to appeal to selfish men 
with deadlocked hearts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Williams Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 12:45 AM
Hello Vicki I have read your comment and I would be very grateful if you could direct me to the poem you say I left a comment on as I have not been here for over a year, my account was hacked a few months ago someone was leaving comments in my name which I did report, thank you.
Acquah Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 9:48 PM
David when I run across it I'll be sure to get your attention. I knew something was strange, and it did not seem as something you would have said.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Apocalyptic writing that declares harsh truths that we better listen to! Excellent poem dearest Vicki! So happy to visit you again! A seven!
Acquah Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thanks for stopping by ...you were so missed and loved.
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