Deadfall

dults we stand for time has passed us by 
our childish ways have bloomed into a blight
the roots we set, now gnarled, so pained decry, 

the visages of springtime love's delight.
Upon foul winds you've flown, you've left
a thief without the strength to be forthright.

A fallen limb, a rotting bough bereft,
am I to lay alone, as winter comes,
as you bloom again within a riper cleft?

Is this your wish, and how your pledge succumbs? 
Never had I dreamed I'd be so harshly left 
for a younger bloom with naught but dried crumbs.

By sins of the flesh, we've been undone.
I will not forgive what you've become.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Delilah's "Adultery" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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November 7, 2012 at 11:42 AM
Outstanding write Debbie! Congrats on your win! Hugs
Onclaud Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 6:13 AM
very elizabethan and restrained, debbie... lovely rant.. congrats with huggs!.:)
Liwayway Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 5:52 AM
big congratulations on you grand win friend Debbie... Hugs Maria
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November 7, 2012 at 12:45 AM
Big congratulations on your win Debbie xx
Tsiluma Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 11:14 PM
Congrats on your win Debbie! You've done it well!
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 10:27 PM
Great write. Well done.....Seren
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November 6, 2012 at 8:30 PM
Dear Lady,, congratulations in Delilah's " Adultery , forgive or not to forgive " contest. Enjoyed stopping by to read her winners. Good Night~ Always & Forever PD"
Horsman Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 2:26 PM
this is so profound Debbie, and so much sadness, ....a poem of regret?
Carrillo Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Good poem Debbie. We forgive , but we don't forget. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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October 18, 2012 at 6:24 AM
Oh!!Unforgiveness is a harsh sentence on the one who does not forgive for it eats away at them..Enjoyed reading for it has great rhythm, flow, and rhyme to it..Sara..I will have to try Terza Rima if I haven't already done so..Sara
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October 17, 2012 at 7:21 PM
Always the art of true poetry from you. Wonderful piece Debbie. Hugs n luv Michael. Ps. No Soup mail was received Hun. When did u send it ?
Uy Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 6:05 PM
So much emotions here. Subtle expresssions of sadness and at the same time anger. Good read. Thanks for sharing.
Gasun Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 5:09 PM
Wow! This is fantastic! I love it my dear friend, Debbie! I hope I can write this form next time. Thank you so much also for the thoughts and knowledge you've shared. It's so much appreciated. love always, LG
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