Dead Winter

Sidney ~ LeeAnn Contest Name Dead Winter | DEAD WINTER On a dead cold night upon the hill, The ugly one had ate his fill, The blood and gore he tasted still, Ah them kidneys were a treat, The wide open mouth, the silenced scream, Ripped out her throat, her skin was cream, He’d seen before, remembered dream, He’d nibbled on her teat, He made a grab, at an old man Roo, Who slashed his paunch, his guts fell through, Kick boxed an flattened Ugly too, Ol Roo was pretty neat. Ugly got a hook and fishing line, Put back his bowels blood an slime, He’d get that Roo some other time, Scrotum money pouch, complete, So stay away from Johnson’s flat, The Dingoes chewed upon his fat, Crow's, Goanna's suck inside Ugly at, Some say revenge is sweet. Don Johnson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/18/2012 1:41:00 PM
A rip roaring write excellent work there 7 mate!! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "DEAD WINTER" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:50:00 AM
A great win Don, stilll gory. congratulations x
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:38:00 PM
DON,, a wonderful win ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours truly,..p.d.
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:19:00 PM
Don, A SUPER CONGRATS!! SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY IN MY CONTEST. MY SIS HELPED ME OUT A BIT WITH THIS CONTEST. HAVE A SWEET ONE.
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Date: 12/12/2011 5:46:00 PM
Wow....I'm not a man and STILL I am in pain! lol...I am not going near ole JOhnson's flat...the dingoes would enjoy nibblin on my excess fat..(scary). Good luck, Don. Happy Holidays too. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/9/2011 6:28:00 PM
Too right mate I tell you keep on telling em just how we are such a gentle mob down under! Good Writes mate! I'll think I'll tear of too America and the scalping Indians compared to Don and his pen!
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Date: 12/9/2011 10:08:00 AM
That's what I call graphic! Best wishes in the contest, Don.
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:48:00 AM
You win. That's the best.
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:42:00 AM
Chills up and down. Marvelous Ugly macabre.
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Date: 12/9/2011 4:44:00 AM
Er wow x
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