Dead Weight

I got online to find me a date
My computer crashed and made me wait
Finally someone replied
Two years after I died
She said it was over, too much dead weight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:20 PM
That's a riot, Larry. How do you come up with this stuff? I've actually tried online dating and met a couple nice people this way several years ago. Still mateless, though. Well, maybe I'm carrying around "too much dead weight." Love, Carolyn
Taylor Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Clever one, my friend. Humorous. Enjoyed. Ralph
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August 31, 2010 at 6:07 PM
Good one!
Culverhouse Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 5:57 PM
funny--good one!! I told you I'd help you smile...
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