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There’s a lot of poems that have gone unread They hang in limbo as if written by the dead Awaiting for someone to hear their cry As they do not have a mouth to question why Open one Just for fun It may make you laugh, Ooh! UHH! Or just sigh To those that will make you say Oh my Oh my And don’t forget to leave a comment It make those poems alive and give the poet a judgement For example, I found one just a minute ago It was boring and time wasting if you must know The ending just killed me, it drove me up the wall Till I read who wrote it, it was yours truly Sidney Hall *Save the poet Make a comment* Small print: please note this is not an advertisment for personal gain but to assist those new poets who may value your comment. However, if you feel compelled to comment on me poems I will not stop you :-)

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Date: 5/22/2011 6:14:00 PM
I equally enjoyed this lovely write sidney! You are very talented and there is not an iota doubt.... The ending just killed me, it drove me up the wall Till I read who wrote it, it was yours truly Sidney Hall ....i found this very enjoyable and i see the guts in u ...
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Date: 5/21/2011 2:34:00 AM
Nice poem on the never ending list of unread poems Sidney. Every so often I read some of the unread material. There have been a few gems hiding in there, it's sad that all of them can't be read for various reasons. Many thanks for your always kind comments, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 5/7/2011 2:27:00 PM
humm, very interesting,,, and yes keep the smiles... have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY tomorrow... celebrate with smiles ... take care..P.D.
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Date: 5/3/2011 11:06:00 PM
Sidney, a great way to inspire people to comment. I don't know why it is so difficult for folks to do, but by now you may have noticed, the main commenters are the premium members and they are doing almost everything here at Soup. I think when a newbie realizes that he wants to really be a part of this site, then he will wise up and start commenting. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:45:00 PM
This should actually go on a blog that's how could you did it.. Just to highlight that you do have your sane moments ;) jk hun.. Seriously though you do make a good point and you do it brilliantly.. As for that hug? Well I owe you one *p love Wilma
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:12:00 PM
Hit "my personal info" under "member area" on the left. Scroll down to "Show soup mail link" and hit "yes". Good luck!!
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:41:00 PM
Ah, doing your civic rounds, I see. Well done, me homeboy. I had me a good laugh at your poem. Now show us the way to "Yours Truly's Unread".
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:14:00 PM
lol I really need that laugh you are so funny I'm glad we're friends
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