Sidney Hall Mad Poet Poet Rhyme

Dead Poetry

There’s a lot of poems that have gone unread
They hang in limbo as if written by the dead
Awaiting for someone to hear their cry
As they do not have a mouth to question why

Open one
Just for fun
It may make you laugh, Ooh! UHH! Or just sigh
To those that will make you say Oh my Oh my

And don’t forget to leave a comment
It make those poems alive and give the poet a judgement
For example, I found one just a minute ago
It was boring and time wasting if you must know

The ending just killed me, it drove me up the wall
Till I read who wrote it, it was yours truly Sidney Hall 
 
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Red Fiery May 22, 2011 at 6:14 PM I equally enjoyed this lovely write sidney! You are very talented and there is not an iota doubt.... The ending just killed me, it drove me up the wall Till I read who wrote it, it was yours truly Sidney Hall ....i found this very enjoyable and i see the guts in u ...

James Fraser May 21, 2011 at 2:34 AM Nice poem on the never ending list of unread poems Sidney. Every so often I read some of the unread material. There have been a few gems hiding in there, it's sad that all of them can't be read for various reasons. Many thanks for your always kind comments, have a lovely weekend....:)

Poet Destroyer A May 7, 2011 at 2:27 PM humm, very interesting,,, and yes keep the smiles... have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY tomorrow... celebrate with smiles ... take care..P.D.

Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2011 at 11:06 PM Sidney, a great way to inspire people to comment. I don't know why it is so difficult for folks to do, but by now you may have noticed, the main commenters are the premium members and they are doing almost everything here at Soup. I think when a newbie realizes that he wants to really be a part of this site, then he will wise up and start commenting. Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels May 3, 2011 at 8:45 PM This should actually go on a blog that's how could you did it.. Just to highlight that you do have your sane moments ;) jk hun.. Seriously though you do make a good point and you do it brilliantly.. As for that hug? Well I owe you one *p love Wilma

Delysia Hendricks May 3, 2011 at 8:12 PM Hit "my personal info" under "member area" on the left. Scroll down to "Show soup mail link" and hit "yes". Good luck!!

Delysia Hendricks May 3, 2011 at 7:41 PM Ah, doing your civic rounds, I see. Well done, me homeboy. I had me a good laugh at your poem. Now show us the way to "Yours Truly's Unread".

Lisa Cooper May 3, 2011 at 7:14 PM lol I really need that laugh you are so funny I'm glad we're friends