Dead Mute

There once was a boy from Sauk City
had mandibles toothy and pretty
but when he spoke
his larynx broke
Parental-types said, “What a pity”

So they took him to a physician
who said, “This is an imposition”
he gave the boy a pill
which was designed to kill
and forwarded him to the mortician

The mortician built a long box
to entomb the boy who just squawks
To plug the holes
and keep out moles
he utilized multiple caulks

A most gruesome tale and quite gory.
Does a moral lie in this story?
Would you give me a shout 
if you figure it out?
It may lead one into satori
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Murray Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 3:11 AM
The moral is in your name. At Limericks you are never tame. You seem quite good. And so you should. Keep the monkier, find the fame.
Flats Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Immoral is my name? Just kidding. Thanks for the compliment, Jean. Forget fame...notoriety, I wanna be a CELEBRITY! (not!;-) Cheers and choc'lit! ~ john
P  Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Moral is steer way clear of physicians! Good lim'rik.
Flats Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 9:49 PM
You know...I think you are spot on! I tend to do just that, but I wasn't thinking about it when I wandered off. Happy days! ~ j
Y. Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Hi John, This was quite a gruesome tale for sure. I'm stumped as well. But why not, the moral of the story is "accept someone as they are even if they appear to be different or broken. I know I'm probably way off. But thought I'd give it a try. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis o
Flats Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 7:46 AM
Hi Alexis! I really did not have a moral in mind, it just sorta fell outta my head this way;-) I like your assessment though! Good advice. Hard to apply sometimes, huh? Thanks for reading my sillies. huggerdoodles ~ j
Smith Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Hmmm...got me Stumped
Flats Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 7:43 AM
me too;-)
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