Dead Man Walking

Kings of Leon- Pyro
Can be sung to the music almost exactly. I wrote this after playing(for the first time) a card game of hearts and the girl had all the hearts in her hand and was shooting for the moon(to take it all). Its also about getting involved in a relationship where YOU KNOW you will be used but, out of your control, and knowingly, you fall in love with her like every other suckered man. 

She's got everybody's heart in her hand
It's just the game she plays
it's just like she'd plan
She takes the best of a man
and then leaves him damned
she's got everybody'sheart in her hand

And I.....'m a dead man walking
And my...... body is my coffin

She's shooting for the moon 
It will all be over soon
Put it down, turn it over
she's the controller of you
And all is done in one 
afternoon
I cant stop her 
I'm amazed to watch her 
shooting for the moon

And I...'m a dead man walking 
And my.... body is my coffin
And if I......am good and free to go-
Then why... does it feel like death row

What went wrong
Can you tell me
What went wrong
Can you tell me

x4
And I...'m a dead man walking
And my... body is my coffin
If I....am good and free to go-
Then why... does it feel like death row

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/14/2014 12:38:00 PM
I feel the pain and suffering of betrayal so powerfully expressed. Wonderful Manolo Muse"I'm amazed to watch her shooting for the moon" the key line. Love XXXXX rajat
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Date: 11/11/2014 8:22:00 PM
I can't believe I'm the first one to comment. These are powerful lyrics! Fantastic expression of pain and heartbreak, Manolo. Well done!
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Date: 11/11/2014 10:23:00 PM
Thank you so much. I appreciate the encouragement :)
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