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Dead Love

His love to me is dead. I scoff at it, for it was nothing. Had it any value, I might place it as if it were a trinket inside my chest of treasures. Many came before him. Others will trail behind his empty steps. Those footsteps – like a ghost’s – have all vanished. How can a ghost even have footsteps? As I think more about him now, I swallow a big guffaw. He is not even worth a tiny chuckle, so how can I even mock my dead love.

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Date: 9/30/2023 11:01:00 PM
Great deepfelt poem. Congratulations on your win in Silent One contest.
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Date: 9/30/2023 5:42:00 AM
Excellent poetry. Love it. Congrats and God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/29/2023 1:21:00 PM
Back to say congrats on a win.
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Date: 9/29/2023 12:49:00 PM
A treasure? He is not even worth a tiny chuckle… Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 9/29/2023 11:10:00 AM
You have always been so good with the etheree form and a double one also.. I am sure you will write a great one for the contest.. Thanks for taking part in my contest and congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/24/2023 8:45:00 AM
It is hard to really know another person. This poem demonstrates the heartbreak. I liked it. Thank you for great writing.
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Date: 9/24/2023 1:29:00 AM
Love disparaged. Certainly he did not deserve your love and return the affection. Lovely poem. Hugs xx
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Date: 9/23/2023 10:16:00 AM
Great take on the contest theme, Andrea, with the right touch of caustic indifference toward a partner who’s crossed over. Bravo!
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Date: 9/23/2023 9:38:00 AM
Wonderful form and biting poetic justice for a lost love or is it a gain of one's time insight and focus? This is exceptional writing Andrea.
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Date: 9/23/2023 9:32:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. You excel in the” Etheree” form. We all have a relationship like this at one point in our lives. They belong in the past, one shouldn't even waste their time thinking about them. Because it's a waste of time. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend -Alexis
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