Dead Hero Child

slowmotion watching for you to
say take slow motion off and 
delete the sound of my snoring
take my breathe away

stones love
thinking bout my truck
hesitating never was faded
and now it shines again to twst 
breathtaking slow motion watching 
round turning to say

absolutely 
breathtaking

i couldnt believe 
 feeling
all these 
emotions in the midst of silent bliss
and every moment shared
it never mattered to think 
today
 tomorrow came
you are 
were
breath taking
absolutely breathe taking

I swung
dead and left my money i cant spend
now i know this dance floor 
with this smile on my face
where everyone loves that bar!

Here i am
wont you come find me


whenever they turn out the lights
and i get lonely outside in my car
lonely inside my head
ground flowers
licking wounds
aching inside
i know im dead
better off alone

this isn't allowed
so they rip it out

Whose choice is it to take my remains to the morgue now?

but shes not too tough
and now the lights out
lets go
lets talk
to see all those dreams
and what magica world is what now?
what way doe the stars seem to sway?
what saved us?

my heros died that night

I remember it well 
On an on to take me to the crib
be easy
dressed impressive
sexy selective
doesnt mean to disrespect
but when he lays it down


realise you no longer in first place
the spell
was from hell
and no one could tell
all about some nasty girl
and so she gave me her tips
the silence thereafter
Notorious
 the screaming of the chant from hell
do i live by the mood or the moon?
anyway what happens to Cinderella
after midnight if the lights are off?
ghetto baby followed herself down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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