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Dead End Town

He stood on the tracks in the middle of town and thought of yesterday with a weighted frown. Behind him, a life he chose to forget. Ahead a new day, beyond the sunset. Memories of his childhood like a train wreck left him battered and bruised, a noose 'round the neck. A mother who left him before he was nine, a dad who never worked, stayed drunk all the time. His brother, a hero, lost in the 'Nam war. His sister, an addict, he could help no more. Nothing left for him in this dead end town, and so there he stood taking one last look around. He heard the train whistle and his heart felt renewed. With hope for the future, happiness, he pursued. As he boarded and took his seat on the train, he waved goodbye to the heartache, goodbye to his pain. He closed his eyes and fell into peaceful sleep. Then awoke with one memory, he decided to keep. Long ago, Grandpa gave him his pocket watch and said, "Give wings to your soul or you might as well be dead." Just a boy at the time, he did not understand. Looking up now, he thanked Grandpa, watch in his hand.
By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/16/2012 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Second Chance" contest Rhonda. Sorry for the belated congratulations but so much going on at this time. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2012 6:26:00 AM
Excellent and beautiful piece,Rhonda.Nice going.Congratulations on superb win.
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:56:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:46:00 AM
RHONDA.congratulations with your awesome second chance poem. Thank you for the support..luv~PD
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:44:00 PM
Rhonda, beyond the sunset... this is a very lovely and moving poem... Earlier, i was thinking,,i had what it took..just to leave the past behind me.. and move on to another future... this is a great poem..thank you..pd
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