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Walking in circles Of depression Silence the ever present killer On the cul du sac Of life
Inspired by the Rat Pack

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/15/2017 7:14:00 AM
Hello Arthur, lots of people walk the dead end street that goes no where. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/30/2017 10:04:00 AM
Succinctly nice ... Enjoyed reading ...
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Date: 10/27/2017 10:52:00 PM
Beautifully done arthur, deep, powerful and poignant.
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Date: 10/26/2017 1:14:00 PM
Loved this poem, Arthur. Hated living on a cul du sac. Brief poem that packs a punch. Good truth telling, my friend. Love and joy always.
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Date: 10/26/2017 8:38:00 AM
You made good use of your five lines Arthur.
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Date: 10/25/2017 3:16:00 PM
This is really great. With a wee adjustment it could make a fantastic tanka!!
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Date: 10/24/2017 9:42:00 PM
Well expressed Arthur..
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Date: 10/24/2017 12:09:00 AM
Cleverly done with heartfelt reality, Arthur.
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Date: 10/23/2017 7:48:00 PM
so deep and sad Arthur:-( makes me glad i don't suffer from depression:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2017 7:09:00 PM
I feel like stepping right into this magnificent picture Arthur. The loneliness in this piece is palpable! : )
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Date: 10/23/2017 5:03:00 PM
and i sigh reading this touching verse so succint and wrenching, arthur... beautifully done!..huggs
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Date: 10/23/2017 11:08:00 AM
This is a very emotive and creative work..It expresses the feelings of depression very well..Sara..Thanks for the visitst to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/23/2017 10:17:00 AM
Love it...a fav
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Date: 10/23/2017 9:09:00 AM
Ooh so good. Sharp pen! xomo
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Date: 10/23/2017 7:59:00 AM
Arthur, I have always found walking very therapeutic. For me it’s like meditation. I like this piece. :)
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Date: 10/23/2017 5:20:00 AM
I never get tiered of reading your great work so much imagery and powerful .
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Date: 10/23/2017 4:11:00 AM
Wow, Arthur, this s a incredible write, very masterful in every aspect! You have inspired me! I really enjoyed this delightful poem, you have wondrously written such a brilliant piece here, what a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/23/2017 4:08:00 AM
This is poetry my friend!
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