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Dead End Street

Walking in circles
Of depression
Silence the ever present killer
On the cul du sac
Of life


Inspired by the Rat Pack

anxietyartautumnconfusiondeathfree verse

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Darlene De Beaulieu

November 15, 2017 at 7:14 AM

Hello Arthur, lots of people walk the dead end street that goes no where. Have a nice day my friend.

Probir Gupta

October 30, 2017 at 10:04 AM

Succinctly nice ... Enjoyed reading ...

Susan Ashley

October 27, 2017 at 10:52 PM

Beautifully done arthur, deep, powerful and poignant.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

October 26, 2017 at 1:14 PM

Loved this poem, Arthur. Hated living on a cul du sac. Brief poem that packs a punch. Good truth telling, my friend. Love and joy always.

Andrea Dietrich

October 25, 2017 at 3:16 PM

This is really great. With a wee adjustment it could make a fantastic tanka!!

Joseph May

October 24, 2017 at 9:42 PM

Well expressed Arthur..

Michael Tor

October 24, 2017 at 12:09 AM

Cleverly done with heartfelt reality, Arthur.

Jan Allison

October 23, 2017 at 7:48 PM

so deep and sad Arthur:-( makes me glad i don't suffer from depression:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

October 23, 2017 at 7:09 PM

I feel like stepping right into this magnificent picture Arthur. The loneliness in this piece is palpable! : )

Nette Onclaud

October 23, 2017 at 5:03 PM

and i sigh reading this touching verse so succint and wrenching, arthur... beautifully done!..huggs

Sara Kendrick

October 23, 2017 at 11:08 AM

This is a very emotive and creative work..It expresses the feelings of depression very well..Sara..Thanks for the visitst to my page..Sara

Tim Smith

October 23, 2017 at 10:17 AM

Love it...a fav

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 23, 2017 at 9:09 AM

Ooh so good. Sharp pen! xomo

Carol B.

October 23, 2017 at 7:59 AM

Arthur, I have always found walking very therapeutic. For me it’s like meditation. I like this piece. :)

Eve Roper

October 23, 2017 at 5:20 AM

I never get tiered of reading your great work so much imagery and powerful .

Russell Sivey

October 23, 2017 at 4:11 AM

Wow, Arthur, this s a incredible write, very masterful in every aspect! You have inspired me! I really enjoyed this delightful poem, you have wondrously written such a brilliant piece here, what a grandiose poem, Great Work!!