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Dead End Street

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Walking in circles
Of depression
Silence the ever present killer
On the cul du sac
Of life


Inspired by the Rat Pack

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/15/2017 7:14:00 AM

Hello Arthur, lots of people walk the dead end street that goes no where. Have a nice day my friend.

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/30/2017 10:04:00 AM

Succinctly nice ... Enjoyed reading ...

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/27/2017 10:52:00 PM

Beautifully done arthur, deep, powerful and poignant.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/26/2017 1:14:00 PM

Loved this poem, Arthur. Hated living on a cul du sac. Brief poem that packs a punch. Good truth telling, my friend. Love and joy always.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/26/2017 8:38:00 AM

You made good use of your five lines Arthur.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2017 3:16:00 PM

This is really great. With a wee adjustment it could make a fantastic tanka!!

Joseph May

Date: 10/24/2017 9:42:00 PM

Well expressed Arthur..

Michael Tor

Date: 10/24/2017 12:09:00 AM

Cleverly done with heartfelt reality, Arthur.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2017 7:48:00 PM

so deep and sad Arthur:-( makes me glad i don't suffer from depression:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/23/2017 7:09:00 PM

I feel like stepping right into this magnificent picture Arthur. The loneliness in this piece is palpable! : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/23/2017 5:03:00 PM

and i sigh reading this touching verse so succint and wrenching, arthur... beautifully done!..huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2017 11:08:00 AM

This is a very emotive and creative work..It expresses the feelings of depression very well..Sara..Thanks for the visitst to my page..Sara

Tim Smith

Date: 10/23/2017 10:17:00 AM

Love it...a fav

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 10/23/2017 9:09:00 AM

Ooh so good. Sharp pen! xomo

Carol B.

Date: 10/23/2017 7:59:00 AM

Arthur, I have always found walking very therapeutic. For me it’s like meditation. I like this piece. :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/23/2017 5:20:00 AM

I never get tiered of reading your great work so much imagery and powerful .

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/23/2017 4:11:00 AM

Wow, Arthur, this s a incredible write, very masterful in every aspect! You have inspired me! I really enjoyed this delightful poem, you have wondrously written such a brilliant piece here, what a grandiose poem, Great Work!!