Written 28 May 2026 for Speaking o2f Sedoka Poetry Contest of Nette Onclaud.
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The breath, dead silent no pulse ahead, no way back shadows lengthen, day is done No more to explore no more to hope nor to yearn just fading light at day`s end.
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