Dead -- a Senryu Series

Shall I stand alone
In the silhouette of death
The furnace of hell

The unbeliever!
Wash my soul, with hell's fire
Live among : damned

If I had been True
To Christ, my Higher Power
I could live in “Light”

Lenore beside me
For eons of Forever
I am lost : Alone

Evil owns my Soul
Darkness, my Forever life
Ignited in Death

A word of advise :
Live your life with-in “HIS” Love
Know Eternal “ LIFE “

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Judy Konos

Date: 3/7/2011 9:14:00 PM

I think if Steven Spielburg gave it a whirl he could make a full length movie out of your poem....Very interesting from Act 1 to THE END..... Thank you...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/7/2011 1:54:00 PM

Lovely devotional thoughts you have penned so well in the last Senryu

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/7/2011 8:19:00 AM

Very sad, HG. But you do provide good advice in the last verse. I hope you are doing well. You sure have had a lot of contest success, but I haven't heard from you lately. Take care, my friend. Love, Carolyn