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faint scent
of peppermint
permeates
his linens.

limp puppet
lies motionless
waiting for puppeteer.

By: Joyce Johnson
9/18/2012

For Contest Septolet the Puppet

Copyright © Joyce Johnson | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

September 29, 2012 at 12:47 AM

Joyce, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

September 28, 2012 at 8:05 AM

Big conratulations Joyce xx

Connie Marcum Wong

September 28, 2012 at 5:57 AM

I loved the path you chose for this contest Joyce. Cheers on your fantastic win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 28, 2012 at 5:25 AM

Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

September 27, 2012 at 5:05 PM

GOOD one..specially like the last stanza. Congrats once again. BG

Andrea Dietrich

September 27, 2012 at 4:56 PM

wonderful one you wrote, Joyce. Very creative. Congrats on your well deserved win.

September 27, 2012 at 1:41 PM

Reminds me of Charley Macarthy in his box? Congrad's on your win Light & Love

September 27, 2012 at 1:38 PM

Very nice Joyce!Congrats on your win in Nette's contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 26, 2012 at 10:01 PM

CONGRATS JOYCE ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

Carrie Richards

September 26, 2012 at 2:59 PM

This is so fun.......has a cleverness about it! Congrats on your win, dear Joyce!

September 19, 2012 at 11:26 AM

lol, love the peppermint line - this witty one is sure to be a big winner, Joyce : )

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