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Dazzling Day -Qd

Grudgingly, my eyes weaken their grip Curtains rise up on a new morning But no where’s my humble, grey front strip, But Royal day with gems adorning. Bright was the sun, yet it appeared not. Stars shone in the day sky in all hues. “These must be special fruit trees,” I thought, “Each piece perfect, plump, nary a bruise.” Grinning, He said, “Welcome to Heaven.” September 26, 2019

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Date: 10/27/2019 6:00:00 PM
such lovely lines Cindi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/20/2019 4:23:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Cindi, congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 10/19/2019 9:13:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Cindi.
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:26:00 AM
Back to say congrats on your winning a place with your great poem!
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Date: 10/19/2019 7:50:00 AM
A lovely write Cindi. I'm sure the gates will be open when time comes. Hopefully not for a while (lol) Loved this poem. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 9/26/2019 12:46:00 AM
What a day that will be! :)
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Date: 9/25/2019 2:52:00 PM
nice... lovely imagery..
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Date: 9/25/2019 12:40:00 PM
“Welcome to Heaven.” We were expecting you....Nice one Cindi
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Date: 9/25/2019 10:50:00 AM
Nice images in your poem. GL in the contest.
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Date: 9/25/2019 9:31:00 AM
Heaven will be amazing for sure... Wonderful poem. Best for the contest. Blessings
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