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- Dazzling Beauty -

Wilderness and snow
                                    pine trees in sleepy silence
                                   The frost cracks in the creek
                                        as waterfalls icy cold
                                            Diamonds burn
                                             in the clear air
                                       The sky changes to pink
                                            and then orange
                                         - the evening painted
                                      ice flowers on the windows






                                              06/12/2021
                                      Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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December 28, 2021 at 9:19 PM
Hi Sunshine….I felt as if I was right there in that wintery moment. Sunshine writes beautifully about Winter!! …haha! Enjoyed….Debx
Allison Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 5:06 PM
well with your wonderful scenery to inspire you, who else could write such an exquisite wintery poem!:-) hugs Jan xx
Delaney Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 3:43 PM
If anyone could paint a pretty description of winter….it is you, Anne-Lise Totally enjoyed this poem. Hugs SuZ.
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 4:31 AM
Very descriptive and expressive of the season of snow and ice. We don't have very much of it here in the south but when we do it is pretty but very unsafe for us because we are not prepared for it. I enjoyed reading this one today. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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December 21, 2021 at 4:24 AM
Anne-Lise, your Wintery images are crystal clear and quite beautiful! A gorgeous write !!! Merry Christmas xxoo
George   Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Your poem...as gorgeous as the picture. Love it Anne Lise!
Rose  Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 3:43 AM
You blind me with this utter beauty, every word brings out the flowers on the window dear Sunshine, may you have a blessed day full of blooming thoughts and love kind :)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 8:01 AM
A "Wonderful" write and picture. "Love It" Wish I had the picture. Looks like winter is here or close by. Have a great/blessed day........................
Daniel Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 5:48 AM
I love the picture and the words you use to paint it, Anne-lise, hope the winter is mild over your place:)
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December 6, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Hello Sunshine smile, you have painted a beautiful winter scene with your words. Hugs.
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December 10, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, you are welcome my friend. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 5:22 AM
- Hello Darlene, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Great depiction of the scene with this elegant write Anne...hugs
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 5:22 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 9:47 AM
Anne-Lise, you've crafted some stunning imagery. I can see the ice petals on the window ledge through your words.
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 5:21 AM
- Las, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 6:55 AM
I bet it looks stunning Anne, stay warm and take care when venturing out. Tom
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December 8, 2021 at 5:21 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 6:41 AM
Dazzling imagery, Anne-Lise. I see the ice flowers on the window through your words.
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December 8, 2021 at 5:21 AM
- Thank you my friend Vijay, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 6, 2021 at 6:21 AM
This is a gem of a poem, Anne Lise. And a lovely picture to add yo iy. Well done. Hugs.
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December 8, 2021 at 5:18 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 5:33 AM
just beautiful, anne-lise!
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December 8, 2021 at 5:18 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Skelly Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 3:10 AM
Ann-Lise, you have painted a snowy landscape perfectly, not that we really see snow. Or when we do it's nothing startling. I so enjoy others' experiences of a magical landscape. Very lovely poem...Delice
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December 6, 2021 at 3:14 AM
- We have a lot of snow, Delice ... it's beautiful to look at ... but makes everyday life a little difficult ... and it's way too cold ... - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 6, 2021 at 2:26 AM
Ecstatic winter's song, my dearest Anne-Lise. Hugs! xxx
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December 6, 2021 at 2:59 AM
- An early winter this year ... a lot of snow ... terribly cold and slippery to walk ... - Thank you very much for your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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