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Dazzling Balls of Fire

The old year went out with a big boom,
One sentimental New Year's Eve night.
Dark skies displayed many vivid plumes,
My stars! It was such a lovely sight!

One sentimental New Year's Eve night,
Vibrant fireworks had special meaning.
My stars! It was such a lovely sight!
A time when the future lay dreaming.

Vibrant fireworks had special meaning.
Dark skies displayed many vivid plumes-
A time when the future lay dreaming.
The old year went out with a big boom.


Written on 12/29/2020
For: Fireworks Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Eve Roper Date: 2/5/2021 11:57:00 PM Thank you for participating and winning in the Pantoum contest with this wonderful poem. Your poem had great imagery, feeling, and flow, Evelyn. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/6/2021 10:44:00 AM Your contest was so interesting and such fun, Eve. I enjoyed participating very much, and I loved commemorating the new year with this poem. Thank you for all your kind words. Hugs, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/4/2021 2:03:00 PM Love it! Congratulations, Evelyn! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/4/2021 4:49:00 PM Thank you so much, Kim.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/31/2020 2:00:00 AM A lovely pantoum, cleverly constructed. Perfect rhyme too. Best for a win and a Happy New Year. ~~ Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 12/31/2020 8:38:00 AM I like for the new year to go out with a bang. Thank you for the joyful words. :=)

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/30/2020 5:38:00 PM 'A time when the future lay dreaming' - lovely thought, and love the thought! Here's to a New Year full of illumination and luster for you, Evelyn. Happy 2021! :) Gershon Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 12/30/2020 7:35:00 PM Thank you, Gershon. I am truly dazzled by your remarks. Hope your New Year is full of smiles. :) :) :) Evelyn