Dazzling Balls of Fire

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The old year went out with a big boom, One sentimental New Year's Eve night. Dark skies displayed many vivid plumes, My stars! It was such a lovely sight! One sentimental New Year's Eve night, Vibrant fireworks had special meaning. My stars! It was such a lovely sight! A time when the future lay dreaming. Vibrant fireworks had special meaning. Dark skies displayed many vivid plumes- A time when the future lay dreaming. The old year went out with a big boom. Written on 12/29/2020 For: Fireworks Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/5/2021 11:57:00 PM

Thank you for participating and winning in the Pantoum contest with this wonderful poem. Your poem had great imagery, feeling, and flow, Evelyn. Hugs Eve

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/6/2021 10:44:00 AM

Your contest was so interesting and such fun, Eve. I enjoyed participating very much, and I loved commemorating the new year with this poem. Thank you for all your kind words. Hugs, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/4/2021 2:03:00 PM

Love it! Congratulations, Evelyn!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2021 4:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/31/2020 2:00:00 AM

A lovely pantoum, cleverly constructed. Perfect rhyme too. Best for a win and a Happy New Year. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/31/2020 8:38:00 AM

I like for the new year to go out with a bang. Thank you for the joyful words. :=)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/30/2020 5:38:00 PM

'A time when the future lay dreaming' - lovely thought, and love the thought! Here's to a New Year full of illumination and luster for you, Evelyn. Happy 2021! :) Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/30/2020 7:35:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon. I am truly dazzled by your remarks. Hope your New Year is full of smiles. :) :) :) Evelyn