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Dazed and Confused

I'm dazed and confused
I really am in control
Am I who I am
No answer was my reply
Schizophrenia deepens








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Dr.Ram Mehta

April 8, 2011 at 7:00 AM

Nicely defined Schizophrenia with its symptoms, James

Wilma Neels

April 8, 2011 at 4:56 AM

Quite an ironic piece James, you actually portray the confusion brilliantly in this write.. :) Hope your week's been a good one. Have fun this weekend :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 7, 2011 at 8:42 PM

Perfection James in this piece.. short and to the point of the matter.. expressive to impress the reader luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

April 7, 2011 at 3:42 PM

If you really did have schizophrenia, you would probably hear an answer. Cool poem, James. Quite thought provoking! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

April 7, 2011 at 12:34 PM

james, haven;t heard form you in a while... how are you?? i like the tonality and word behavior of this semi-dark yet beautiful piece! sooo lovely..:) huggs, nette

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